Tho still at the beginning I like it a lot, that's good.. I'm gonna wait till you continue then I'll write a better review but the first chapter is cool and I can't wait for the next.
Shameless review part :#0001 - 2 hours since the launch of S. S. Webnovel
"captain!"
"whats the problem Joanne?"
"NO ONE PUBLISHED A REVIEW! *sobbing sounds*"
"It's been 2 hours since I published this novel yet no one has written a review?
THIS HANDSOME OR BEAUTIFUL WEEBS HAVEN'T REVIEWED ANYTHING?"
'DAMN after the weebs took over I can't even insult them anymore'
'How evil can this *urgh * weebs be?'
He thought with disgust
"IF IT'S LIKE THAT I'M GOING TO WRITE THE REVIEW MYSELF
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