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4.24
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StellarJade
Feels and sounds like a wuxia novel and that is absolutely wrong for the Naruto World. And using English translation of Kekkei Genkai just seems wrong.
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Asura_10
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Saka_Super
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EREBOS
HMMMMMMMMMMMM.............................................. ...INTERESTINGG.....................DONT DISSAPOINTED ME........... ......................
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vanguard1s
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Reveal Spoiler 
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kazuma123
It's not a bad idea, you should get a editor......................................................... ........................................................................................
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Olejka_Avtor
As an author, of course, I'll put a solid 5 !!!
This is a translation, not an original work.
Fanfic Chinese.
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Skepparn
Decent story, but seriously shitty writing, it's written like chinese cultivation novels with mc going from weak bullied orphan to getting a power for 1 day and becoming the bully instead and is just plain arrogant over a tiny level and 1 spell...
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Ali_Makles
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