Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 1 The Beginning of the book Overpowered Harry potter

Stupid second wish if you ask me I mean he's going to reincarnate on HP not naruto at least get something like Merlin, Slytherin, Roronwa... But NO he want Orushimaru 🙄🤨😑

Is this going to be like naruto? Where you ignored the girls and make a lonely stupid and most of all have disease like he is the one above all?

Awful grammar .The sentences could have been worded a lot better .Atleast you used smaller paragraphs .It would have been a lot worse if the paragraphs were unnecessarily large and overly dicriptive.

Awesome so far

,niice

thanks for the update

Interested

why them when you can get the best he could wish for nasuverse Solomon power and knowledge

Interesting opening chapter but you really need to use something like grammerly or a proof Reader

great start, best one I have seen for Harry Potter fan fic[img=recommend]

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thanks for the chapter

can you please continue overlord naruto

Yap

Reads like a 12yr old wrote it. Has no flow. Also a wish start is just lazy, even for a fanfic which are usually just lazy stories altogether.

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

thanks for the story ;D

El dementor tiene un buen instinto

Thanks for the chapter