Chapter comments on the chapter 17 Graduation of the book Shinobi Life!

Thanks for the chap, its really good so far but id request adding in lightning jutsu and just raise it to master and say its because of the fruit Grandmaster is awakening Also looking forward to the ino ship 😁

It doesn't matter that he saw the flying thunder god Jutsu he has no idea what it means the seal is meaningless unless you're a sealing master and the best sealing master at this point in time is Jiraiya and he doesn't know how to use it so it's worthless to the main character also he won't be able to use the multi shadow clone Jutsu it takes to much chakra he will only be able to make like 3 clones :/

We want more...we want more :: . ... .... .... .... ....... And fast

Unless he is a master at fuinjutsu than memorizing the hiraishin won't do much for him, though he could commit it to memory and try to use it later on if he becomes a master in fuinjutsu.

thanks for the chapter will the MC use any other moves from other animes if so I think he should use the special beam cannon from Dragon Ball Z most writers have the MC use the Kamehameha

If he's replacing any one then pls let it be Kiba I mean nobody will even notice if he's gone and he can already use observation haki to replace his tracking so

Thanks for the chapter

You have to let him teach Naruto the flying raijin

En vrai tu le fais exprès de ne pas bien écrit le nom de Sakura Haruno

Thanks for chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the great chapter! 😄

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

man, your work has high potential to be above average ones. you just rushed out all foundation for development. tho technical explanation and characters development needs serious and a long thought out plans and an actual long chapters, it would be rewarding for you and me (us; readers), believe me. well, you either edit all previous chaps or just improve future chaps to be more detailed (a single long chapter that you dish out into part could work). it's a shame really, such good ideas and potential. *his one piece crossover skills could easily labeled as self made jutsu, because no one can use it other than him. a signature moves really.

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the genin exam was taken in another room (just saying)

didnt hokage watching this event with crystal ball? wont he find out that he read scroll of sealing?