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Really a great novel author. The background world is just captivating and motivates the reader to read more and more. Good job, author!
I've only read the first few chapters, but this is already a promising story. I would totally recommend this and look forward to seeing how this story plays out.
The story line is very interesting, and the way you describe the whole scene mesmerized me quite alot, worth reading❤️❤️❤️
I am giving it a 5 star ratting which it deserves
Once i started reading the book,I knew it was different.and the prologue really was an eye opener,that's why everyone likes it.
Going deeper into the story,I was intrigued with the characters.
Everything was thought before hand.
But there the author should put into consideration that the paragraphs are way too long.
And readers cannot comment.
Aside that,I like the book,and recommend it to others as well.
I hope it becomes contracted soon.
To me I like how in the beginning, the story made me want to question what is going on and makes me feel as if i want to know more (I think that’s a good thing) The characters are also interesting and how you described them. But so far it looks really good :)
Loving your story brother!
The story has excellent plot twists, you will definitely get more attention if you wait a little-
But, I hope your work definitely gets what it deserves!
As a narrative- your story is finely carved, and it craves the reader to keep reading![img=update][img=update][img=update]
Wow! This is the real definition of amazing. Especially after the beginning.
I was just absorbed into the story without even knowing.
I love it.
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This story is good and I like that you gave terminology. This could be a hidden gem.
But, there are grammar problems. Fragment sentences, missing punctuations, unclear wording, and some unneeded capitalization. I did see two contractions that I don’t think exist.
Other than that, if you fix those mistakes, there will be something good here. Keep up the good work!
I liked this book, it was a little different from the other books. The background of the world is nice. I can see that the author has put a lot of thought in the background and characters.
This story is very nice in terms of character design and world background building. writer has very wide imagenation and is good at discription.
The story and write has good potential.
As story start to develop it will hook your intrest in it.
All the characters are designed very careful and amazingly.
Writer's updating stability is good.
There sill chance in writing quality but that can be just neglect for now. Author can improve it in time.
Overall I like the story. Give it a try.
So Orb was the MC! You focused Heytu too much so he is MC what i though. What kind of style is this GOT? Addition, Orb is very overpowered for all chars, he might be good as wel as antagonist. What's the root thing 's coming? someone give copy please. This story is going on a high level in the beginning i liked it too much [img=exp]
Oldukça iyi ve farklı bir tarz karakterlerin işlenmesi derin olmuş ve ayrıca yan karakterler de arka planda kalmamış.fantastik türünü sevenler için güzel bir alternatif olmuş.
Fantastic literature in Turkey grew steadily. On the other hand there are not much Turkish writers in this area. This book is a gripping work written with good fiction. I hope it will continue.
Guzel bir hikaye olmuş karakter sayısı biraz fazla geldi ara ara unutuyorum kim kimdi diye geriye dönüp bakmam gerekiyor karakter çeşitliliğini biraz sadeleştirmeniz gerekebilir.
Fantastik bir hikaye sürükleyici anlatım heyecanlı farklı bölümler etkili anlatım keskin tasvirler ve betimlemeler ile detaylandırılmış okumaya başlayınca zamanı unutuyor insan kesinlikle yorucu ve sıkıcı değil....
Perfect start for a Turkish writer hope to make it better and better for future chapters and finish with a great ending. Thanks bro for your big efford👍
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