Chapter comments on the chapter Dangers of the Night (4) of the book My CEO Harem Cultivation System

Great chapter!! If that is the hotel what happened to the mother and child? Hope everybody is ok and safe. He needs to save the mermaid, Miss He, the mother and his daughter/neice!!

He finally used his points 👍

Thanks for the chapter

ok, I'm a bit confused. was there only 1 monster and not multiple people working in this organization. maybe I didnt read it properly, but I u still need improvement. specially when something sudden and out of nowhere happens. u just write it expecting us to be shocked, but I at least was confused. u should tell us how something out of sudden happened.

Thank you for your reply. sorry i was so harsh in my comments at times. please continue to write and hone your craft. your talent is there, just focus on your comfort zone and stick to your vision. im sure your reading base will accept whatever you ultimately offer, as long as your passion continues to show through your words.

That’s it for me....what is this a super hero story now?