The writings are awesome! The story and the characters are well-written and designed. Good job, author! I expect more chapters soon.
That's all for now!
I love this fantasy novel of yours, the ML and FL are seems suited for each other’s and seems like fate brings them together, expecting more of them and other characters in later chapters
Wonderful story so far! I was only supposed to read a few chapters but ended up reading more! Too bad I had to put it down for the meantime, but I will definitely come back for more! The main characters and the island itself are very intriguing! and the attraction between the mcs made my heart race! Keep it up! This is definitely going on my recommended list!
wow u have a wonderful book there .. i enjoyed it a lot,totally recommend it too,the main character is feisty and intriguing.. keep going!! this is a complete fun ride!!
Grammar 10/10 I love the plot already just based off the first chapter. The description is just mwah beautiful everything described was so clearly .... Overall this is a 10/10 will read again
Overall, your writing is a joy to read. There's some words used wrong here and there, but it doesn't detract from the story.
The descriptions of your characters are also well done. That's also a joy to read.
Good job on your story!
Let me just say, I love the whole concept and the "star-crossed lovers" thing you've got going on. It's super interesting and keeps me hooked! Keep it up! :D
Doing really well with the story, character description and background. More people need to be reading this!!! I hope more chapters are going to be coming soon!
NaoKat