Reviews of Travel in search of pleasure and fun. by Odyosis - Webnovel

it is so full of errors that it becomes unreadable. The only favor the author can do in the world is cut off the hand with which he writes or if you really don't want to suffer at least don't publish this rubbish.

bad, i dont want to spend time explaining why, it just is

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I hate this fanfic....................................... MC trash................................................ 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

It's completely unreadable, stay far away from this. Even MTL isn't this bad --------------------------------------------------------------------------

Saya menyukai fanfic ini walaupun terkadang sangat membenci sifat MC. Tapi alur ceritanya sangat menarik dan bagus untuk saya. Saya harap ada perbaikan sifat dalam diri MC seiring berjalannya waktu dalam cerita tersebut

Writing Quality :1/5 ( Horrible, the biggest problem here) Stability of Updates 3/5 Ok but not good Story Development : 2/5 Meh Character Design : 1/5 World Background 1/5 --------- The first problem is the writting... this grammar sucks so much.. I understand if someone doesn't speak english well but at least have a basic level.... The story is poor in detail and the grammar makes it even worse to understand the little mentions he makes about everything. This story is just a big meh , not recomended if you are looking for quality or story development.

The Grammer is bad but the overall story and everything else is fine Author no disrespect but please fix the grammer It gets confuzing on who you are referring to

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Nice Book. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

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Apoyo este buen Fic Lo mejor de un MC alfa Conquistando diestra a siniestra A todas las heroínas y dominando 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

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I like this novel very very much. ..........................................................................................................................

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The best novel about an antagonist as the main character that I have read in my life! The truth is, of course, the minus is grammar, but I really liked the novel

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You can tell, I thought the story wouldn't be understood, for every chapter it was getting better. What I liked the most was the character development and what each one thought. At first I didn't like the MC's personality but in the end I accepted it. It's not the best grammar but it's understood for me.

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When will we see Cara Delevingne? Hope to hear from you soon or whenever. Love the story......................... .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .