Chapter comments on the chapter Prelude of the book The Tale of the Void Emperor

Wtf?! For what this scene with torture? Where is truck-kun?

I'll be lenient because this is your first book but the words seems blad with no emotions, you're not bringing out the real essence of your art. Your words are meant to make the reader have a vivid imagination of the scenery, to make the reader delve really into the fantasy. I really like the direction which I presume the book is moving in and I hope you improve your writing style.

Poor guy. Got ruined because of a girl.

Author you should keep up the good work and just ignore all the suc*er 'cause I really like your idea for 1st chapter. ✌️✌️👍👍

This chap was good but could have elaborated on certain scenes but it was good overall

POV: you are looking for Daniel_Choritz

looks like fate wanted him dead, dunno what you mean something else in store

What’s with the 3 notes in the first chapter?

This whole plot behind his transmigration and the thing in his soul is revealed at the near end of the second volume. At that time, This backstory is one of the experiences related to Athan where he finally hit realization at that time and starts his own path, ( the title of the novel ).

Thanks for the chap

Author, maybe put the author comments at the end, inserting constantly into the story just takeS me out of the story

Truck-kun wasn’t invited to the party this time :(

Who thinks like me that this chapter was somewhat funny. 😂 😂

for me, he does not need to go back. why'd he go back anyway... it's not as if he has it all in that life. Enough that the petty boss and 3 boys get their comeuppance. Maybe Lily herself personally took revenge on them.and that is another story...huuuu

Yeah, the truth is we do that a lot assuming what's going to happen, but it's something that happens involuntarily when you read a lot that's why cliche stories are boring most of the time, you're right that we shouldn't share those opinions in the comments. I usually ignore them and don't comment on it or when I do comment I use them as hypothetical jokes but if that bothers you I won't, Thanks for writing, I think I will enjoy this novel.👍👍👍👍

I like the style of writing by the author. I think im going to stick my nose in this one for a while. I just hope i wont be disappointed though!

Torcher?

I love coming up with theories and be proven wrong. it makes for a fun story. however I keep them to myself I like to be surprised. I hope this turns out to be nearly as good as some of my favorite books here.

oh i really hope he gets his revenge soon. i don't mind if it's the last thing he will do in this novel.. but I'm wondering if lily will also reincarnate.

but author-san what if they're from the future? 😙