Let me be shameless and give my work a five star.
Thank you to all of you who appreciated this fic.
Lets hope you like future chapters as well.
Warning*
There will come a time where frequent emotion manipulation skill will be used but to side characters or villains'.
well ... i give this 5 for now, because i'm just start read and found this fanfic soooo.. if something happen or not my taste well just drop some stars , hopefully not[img=recommend]
i need more chapters
please give me chapters ๐ญ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐please....................................................
Dรฉjame ser desvergonzado y darle a mi trabajo un cinco estrellas.
Gracias a todos los que apreciaron este fic.
Esperemos que tambiรฉn les gusten los prรณximos capรญtulos.
I'm laughing my head off, the author made so many mistakes at once, he chose haku (A man) within the harem, he chose a name Alex in the middle of a mute with Japanese names, he made the MC OP right away, I like MC OP, but not the type that becomes OP effortlessly, even with little training,
it's better than seeing one who already becomes the god of the world in the first chapter. My excitement for this piece went from 100 to 0 in 3 minutes.
I'm laughing my head off, the author made so many mistakes at once, he chose haku (A man) within the harem, he chose a name Alex in the middle of a mute with Japanese names, he made the MC OP right away, I like MC OP, but not the type that becomes OP effortlessly, even with little training,
it's better than seeing one who already becomes the god of the world in the first chapter. My excitement for this piece went from 100 to 0 in 3 minutes.
you beat your cancer or have any? author
comment on this if your alive then God bless Jesus and if you don't comment on this in a year well may you rest in peace
No Sakura ๐๐ผ
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An amazing piece of art representative of what a good harem fanfic should be like, it shows genuine care from the mc and has the girls as real characters rather than cardboard boxes
I like this novel very much so ddont dropped this novel plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. ๐๐๐โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐๐๐ฎ๐ฎ๐คค๐คค๐คค๐คค๐คค๐คค๐คค๐คค๐คค
Well, yeah....*sips on his drink*
As I thoughts, writing slice of life, way harder for starting writters.
Because it's just hard to make mundane life interesting. Making characters feels alive and showung development without outright telling - is requires some decent skills.
What? What I am talking about? *another sip*
You see, the best description of this story would be slice of life. Even though there is no tags. Should probably figure out with *wish fulfillment * and *op mc * , but hey. Saitama op too, right?
So what the problem?
*takes a very slow sip*... Ugh.
It's boring.
There is no action. No deep characters.
No development.
It's just some weak-willed guy getting girls in most boring way.
You will think that mc problems with character from previous life, would play some role,give him a character development. Maybe makes him arrogant and cruel, making some cliche plot of girls trying to make him see a reasons...
Well *sips* no.
There is nothing.
It's just a normal guy living most boring life in a far more interesting world.
Smut is kinda meh too.
*sips.
So, if there is some good sides?
There is a harem!
And it's doesn't have many grammar mistakes!
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*sips *
What? That's all.
P. S. Is it a self-insert? Feels like it...
More harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem please
Harem_Lord