Chapter comments on the chapter The Mines of the book The Adapter's System

is this just background for chapter 1?

2 chapters in and I already love it.

Well and here I thought last few chapters the Capsule was some stolen or lost artifact and he was unlucky to be put on a hit list and over the intro the story would work in the facts and backstory of the character leading back to him getting a Tear and Running for his life and fusing with The Device. And turn out I over complicated this and he just need to get on the bad side of some dudes and have basic pocket Nuke or Tear of a Angel even though he is a miner which shouldn’t get that much right but still has that up his pocket. As for the chapter decently paced yeah like the rest of the story and overall story wise still gonna keep around 4/5 until something major drives up or down.

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

is this a rewrite of the other story?

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

still doesn't explain where the tear of angle thing came from...

Thanks for the chap