The grammar is superb! "wink, wink, nudge, nudge" Never have I ever read a book with such great grammar. Like the fact that Pollen was a trader of the empire I wonder what goods he sells. Chuchuchu
Amazing start!
You won't regret reading this book, it's a rollercoaster of emotions already and it's only two chapters in.
Characters are are well written and the world background description is imaginative and creative!
Well done author, I look forward to your updates!
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