Reviews of No Longer Empress - Page 1

3 Reviews

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  • Character Design
  • World Background

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TheShadowOfMordor
The grammar is superb! "wink, wink, nudge, nudge" Never have I ever read a book with such great grammar. Like the fact that Pollen was a trader of the empire I wonder what goods he sells. Chuchuchu
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Elizabeth_Shelton
The author is 13; can't write. Never consulted me for editing before jumping the gun and publishing because she got too excited lol. 5 stars lol.
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xAlexiax
Amazing start! You won't regret reading this book, it's a rollercoaster of emotions already and it's only two chapters in. Characters are are well written and the world background description is imaginative and creative! Well done author, I look forward to your updates!
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