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ALFAS
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Piggy
something that irritates me is the fact that you say that he treasures his family but the first time when he actually considers his sister as his sister is after he went to the sixteenth heavens. thats pretty pathetic.
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mightymc_plane
This is kind of turning into a novel that I was reading like a year or two ago I think the last time I checked on it, it got dropped at around 600 chapters; the updates were kind of slow and the chapters were only like a 2 minute read which is way too short hopefully this doesn't turn out like that novel. But this novel is around a 4 minute read, each chapter is usually a quarter or sometimes half of the chapter feels like a filler so it's not the best either.
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unofficial_3471
I really enjoy this novel, I like reading about cultivation and they all have their own little twist and some are obviously better than other, this one is great though, it brings me in and I like how it progressing from the chapter I'm currently on.
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Kutu
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kunichan
well one word . if you are a masochist, wants to be mentally tortured this is for you!!! this is the first time ii m going to do a bad review and did not even last 2-3 chapters . the story has a lot of potential especially in world building but bro!!! you gotta ruin it with the mc stupidity ! might as well make him normal teenager not reincarnator. mc is projecting the character of a loser and you are telling me he is a young paragon it past life? i am not gonna continue reading this but for those who are curious check till the end . the only advantage here is the update stability and potential world background .
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AsTop
Hayoooo!
i'm a new reader here. The Author just copy the novel Emperor Domination in this novel. And pasted it here. Well I like this eventhough the other idea is from Emperor Domination novel.
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Kutu
bad, why make mc a reincarnated "supreme expert" if he is gonna get nerfed by the system? pointless struggle makes a meaningless and boring...
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Ismaile_Hossain
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PrimorDious
A very good and interesting story to read. But can be bad for those who loves sword wielder or spear wielder as the main weapon of the MC is bow as the author tried to do something different. I was very excited and was hoping to read more but his weapon choice made my interest plummet down rapidly and after two or three more chapter, I stopped reading this story. Leaving aside the weapon choice, everything else is quite good, the world building is awesome, the character have weights and the writing quality is super good. Even the updates are regular, so anyone who is not biased against Bows can enjoy this story to the fullest.
Thank You.
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Lelem
Can someone explain to me why he didn't sell his technique at heavenly path library and get tons of spirit stones to cultivate or buy other stuff that he needs.
He is a paragon he should have so much technique
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Landlord_0651
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QamarPurity
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Jesus_Bianchi
Its a web novel so 9/10 Times youd expect the Overall oF the sTory to be terible but...
My 7 Year old cousin could write a story with a better background which Would make more Sense than this.
The story starts with a guy who decides to spend 2.5 Billion Dollars on a game which are not his (theYβre his aunties) his aUntie cASually agrees to give him that money.
Uh ah also the writing narratioN ahhh i cant
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Hussain_Khalifa
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Ayley_Acer
I love it!!!!
keep it up.
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q00u
The author doesn't seem to know what kind of story this should be.
So, imagine a cultivation world. Is it a cultivation story? No, the main character dies. But they are reborn in a different world. Oh, it's an isekai? No, they return to their first world through a VRMMO. Hey, that's the title of the story! But they also get a system, with an AI, and nobody else has that. But it's not really a system story either.
Many threads are brought up, but abandoned before they can do anything interesting. The game prevents the MC from using their prior cultivation techniques. Oh, but there might be workarounds (through the shadow clone, or eaching others). Is the MC going to do something clever to get their old techniques back? Nope, once he gets the system that restriction goes away. Nevermind then.
He wants to take his human-form snake followers and take over the criminal underground. Sounds exciting! Just kidding, he dumps them on the side of the road. I guess the snakes are off in the interesting story, while we just follow the terrible MC around.
Everything is like this. Oh, there's an annoying girl at school that the MC keeps rejecting but she won't get the message. Just kidding, the MC totally loves her now. Let's get married on the first date.
My point is, there are deep problems with the story. The author often retcons their own story (protip: rather than add stuff to the *past*, you can actually go back and edit those chapters when those events were the *present* and put your changes there), So the foundation is constantly shifting. And that's not even touching on the many grammatical and other mistakes. I suspect the author is not very experienced in English. But even if an editor fixed these problems, the story problems would remain.
The premise is interesting, but other stories have used this same premise much more effectively. The earlier chapters are OK, but there is a drop in quality later.
This story can best serve as a rough outline for what the author really wants, but they have to figure that out. Finish this story, but don't drag it out. Then start rewriting it, after you have a firmer grasp of the overall plot.
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Roronoa_ZoRo
π it's quite interesting to read
U have my attention
keep up the good work
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whadip
No matter how flawed and dumb he is to be a paragon he must've been pretty old right since his current progress is due to literal hax. Not only that but with age comes maturity so add 17 years to that. He's still way too dumb and immature considering the facts. Shouldn't have made him a reincarnated to begin with, the novel isn't horribly had but it lacks a certain umph. Unlike other major novels I feel no weight at all to his breakthroughs and the cultivation realms. Dropping this after all. At most he's merely a character that acts his physical age for once instead of a 12 year old with mental issues like the other cliches reincarnated mcs. The problems just keep piling up after a point. There's no excitement either. I found myself skipping and speed reading chapters as they were too boring or just simply couldn't hook me at all. Kind of interesting premise but it was poorly executed.
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Lit_Leveler
Okay so... I need to read more but so far it is a very rough story. I'm two chapters in and there are already a ridiculous amount issues. Grammer for one, using male pronouns instead of female and confusing the reader is a big one. There are also already some plot issues I see on the horizon. Honestly, I think that the premise is good but it just needs more work and thought. Could also use someone to go through and help with grammar. I will try to continue and may update the review if there is any improvement in quality, character depth, or flow vs forced plot.
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Roronoa_ZoRo
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Hunter22
very good novel hope for more ch. and don't drop it please π₯π₯ like other good novel
very good novel hope for more ch. and don't drop it please π₯π₯ like other good novel
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Ryujin290
Nice story to read, good environment, development, story on earth isn't boring, sometimes is better than in the heavens(game), MC isn't so OP yet, I hope continue like this.
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GeneralLuficer
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