Chapter comments on the chapter Beast of the book The Dark Lord's Maiden

what an exaggerated pair of mother and daughter, I'm glad the father is fine the first part of the chapter seems a bit jumbled up, maybe because of the information but toward the end, it gets better nevertheless, I like the first paragraph ;) it seems like you're adept in storytelling for such an era

Alright this one is genuinely good and you got me hooked with your archaic writing. The writing is so good that I could clearly picture the atmosphere...

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Love it! I'm a fan of love and deceit, which is such a different story - and its just so amazing, that you can switch between two such different eras and stories, and still be so freaking talented!!!! as always, amazing <3 <3

You have a good grasp of your own style. It's rare to see the author's personality oozing in her writing. I like how natural you make the dialogues, but I'd like to see a more impacting first chapter. It doesn't resemble the excerpt you put in the synopsis.

Amazing first chapter! Please keep it going, author!

Beautifully written chapter. Nice one, author. I know that I am going to love this book like your other ongoing project, if not more. Just kidding. Hahaha. I love both books. You are amazing. ❤

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