Hello, author here. Thank you for having given my second novel a chance. I plan to update two chapters every day. Moreover, I always read the comments, so I will fix every error that you point out in less than a day.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story.
buddy. I work out at the gym and your story is my go to between sets. if not 14 atleast 5 a week plz. your story is the only thing I look forward to reading on this sight anymore.
A gifted writer who crafts a tale worthy of old bards. Chaos Heir builds from the very onset, and continues to leave the reader craving more. This is their second work. I would also recommend checking out "Birth of the Demonic Sword"
Eve has always been a good author since Birth of the Demonic Sword. But I really feel Chaos has been wildly improving his skill even further. I'm up to date currently at 713 chps and I can't think of a single thing to complain about. There's a growing amount of time given to romance and politics later in the story and even those still feel engaging! It's incredible.
One of the best novel I have ever read.Very good character building.But, alas writer is too slow like a snail.I don't think this amazing piece of work is ever going to be completed.
This is by far the best book on this platform that I have read. I think the balance between the relationship, military/action, alien chase topics is a unique blend that prevents the reader and author from getting bored of any kind of repetitive nature that usually happens with this genre. Please think about adding more chapters, and I hope that you enjoy creating this story as much as I enjoy reading it!
It's one of my favorite novels, but...
After reading almost 700 chapters, I find myself getting tired of the romance between Khan and Monica. I know that this new phase is aimed at the protagonist's political growth, even King Elbas had to be a political being before becoming a God (and in my opinion that was his greatest asset in beating Noah and the Hive) , but I'm really rooting for a twist where the couple has to separate.
My suggestions:
1. A nobleman asking to marry Monica out of revenge on Khan? I am happy. It would give him more space to learn about "political power".
or
2. A third impact where Nak kills Monica? I won't be happy, but I will understand. Another trauma for Khan, more thirst for revenge, a new arc of war and blood.
It's a novel that's worth reading, I don't even have to say more, because it's simply too good to describe and justify, and I don't even know what else to write in this review.
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Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
Honestly, it's one of my all-time favorite stories now. It is a great mix of action, romance, mystery, and drama all bundled up in a sci-fi package. As someone who normally doesn't like sci-fi, just know that if you feel the same way, give this book a try you won't regret it.
The story's plot and character is nice. I like everything that's going on in the book. Nice Jobđź‘Ť. Please check out my book. I am an author and I write a book called "The Dragon Prince: Evolution of The Dragon Era". It's nice, and trust me it's worth reading.
It has an awesome premise amazing world building likeable main lead and leveling system is somewhat easy to follow but honestly the romance is a major downside its constant its never feels like it adds to the story and while there is almost a romantic side in every arc the addition of monica has to be one of the most poorly written characters ever i wont add any more spoilers.
It feels like it ruins what could be an amazing story about a characters self discovery and journey through space but what you end up with is the most surface level poorly written romance story
Haven't read much of it, just in 80 now, but I must say the story is really nice, the characters are lovely and the development of our mc is wild.A must try.
Fights were good. Background was good.Overall common sense was good. However there is just too much romance (new girl every 3-6 months). I didn’t think this would be a near rom com. Also the levels are confusing and powers are not explained that well.
This book is awesome đź‘Ś The story as well as the characters are developing great and described with much detail. Gramma is top and author is interactive with the community quite often.
Great story. Love the character development. I just wish the updates came more regularly. Would be straight up 5 stars with even 1 daily chapter regularly.
Eve is a masterful writer and his stories are unique and I love this book just as I did the last one. The world is unique the power system is extraordinary and not the same predictable type that many stories tend to have. The characters have depth. Good Lord the writing quality is top notch. I'm seriously baffled by the amount of hate because of the romance, though. But it makes sense since he can make the characters likeable and invoke emotions when things don't go as intended. I am also frustrated that he didn't stay with his soul mate but irl things like that happen. Also the story isn't even over! I don't expect Eve to leave the story unfinished like others tend to do and I'll read this until completion.
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