Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 1: Kun Shang of the book The Rebirth of Xiu'er

I read till mid of chapter 2 for now and I really like your writing style! It's obvious you got some experience already. The way you describe things makes it easier to understand and imagine the situation. Xiu'er also seems to be a really funny and sweet Protagonist. I will definetly keep reading 💕

Ooh I really like the descriptions :D

I'm really glad that it's here. I hope you would be able to complete the book. totally loving it

I love this chapter so much 🥰