Yin and Yang Cultivation on Wedding Night

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Anbu310

It's hard to read it, it feels like there are chapters missing as jump from one scene to next. MC is also confusing, at first he is an Otaku who doesn't leave his home then he was an expert who worked at a massage parlor. It's like the author doesn't know what background to give the MC, so he adds things as the story goes on

LV 5

raptorfalcon

The story skips chapters, (or the author has amnesia). Characters refer to words never said, sudden important characters start speaking without ever properly "showing up", the MC uses a talent without ever "getting it", etc. Even if you ignore all that, the story itself is still trash. This site has much better "ecchi" stories if that's what you are looking for,

LV 4

Zenithlr

We, maybe, are witnessing the greatest manwh*re ever made. ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||:

I can read trashy grammar and sometimes rated 5⭐ to it but this story has too many missing scene and elaboration, making it hard to read.(2⭐Writing Quality) That's all I'm complaining the rest ⭐ is my honest but not honest review...(I'm a True Neutral btw so don't hate me for this review.)

LV 4

Lobo_Mau

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Nyanodesu

Any novel that misses out on more than a chapter's worth of content can never get a rating above 1 from me. Translators that do this should really find something else to do with their life.

LV 15

Trucker1487

looks like it might be good story but I'm only 5 or 6 chapters in and it always feels like there is a chapter missing every other chapter or so.

LV 1

Jyo_Bas

poor quality. poor story development. bad character . . .

LV 6

Mithren

I'm opposed to these kinds of stories which is why I'm rating it so low. If you read other reviews you'll see a few indicating there's issues with the story itself. I hope this does not get picked.

LV 10

Khaerul_Anwar_6510

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LV 4

sakakoi

the unique story style is good but I can't wait. So anyone knows RAW for this novel. Any help will be appreciated.

LV 14

Hot_BUN

can't understand the storyline. some of the scene or action are missing. the novel jumps from one scene to another even tho that scene hasn't even finish yet. mc be do the dirty with the Queen but then all of a sudden his fighting some character that was not introduce.

LV 14

ProfessorofCulture

The missing chapters were put later so it got better. rated 18 Chinese novels are pretty rare so I hope this one gets picked................

LV 5

elpelu002

The story sounds good bit there're missing chapters, [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 15

Terahan

A good start to a very enjoyable story. The writing is good and characters are well developed. The story mainly revoles around the activities and less on the locations they occur in.

LV 14

RaiderD

Story jumps, just imagine what happens between the chapters. ( And that in the first 3 chapters ) wow we can be proud of the autor …. Story jumps, just imagine what happens between the chapters. ( And that in the first 3 chapters ) wow we can be proud of the autor ….

LV 15

Slushy_Apollo

story skips chapters, (or the author has amnesia). Characters refer to words never said, sudden important characters start speaking without ever properly "showing up", the MC uses a talent without ever "getting it", etc. Even if you ignore all that, the story is still subpar and now they are adding chapters to explain things and these chapters interrupt the story flow

LV 1

Alexa_Morales_0297

Omggggg this is a amazing book you should definitely read it so yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bye