I like this story and I do recommend it for other people to read. It is fun to imagine having a vehicle that you can upgrade. I also like the development of the characters and the worldbuilding.
Interesting, sometimes superfluous chapters but overall good pacing. Could do with some more final editing for grammar and word choice.
Like the world building and r fact that we learn information with the MC, slightly overpowered MC with slightly overpowered βharemβ
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This story is quite good. Has a nice apocalyptic feeling to it. And if you like apocalyptical vehicles, then this story is defenitely something for you. There is no problem with the grammar or spelling, so it's an easy read.
I have now arrived at chapter 285, so there are approx. another 400 chapters to go (at this time). Those first 285 chapters were quite nice to read, especially the beginning, however, by now it is getting a little repetetive.
1. Some guy or girl plans something nefarious against the MC, is jealous of the MC or simply stupid.
2. This guy or girl, together with his or her gang, attack the MC and shoot at his Minibus.
3. The attackers get surprised by the bullet proof windows.
4. They attack the tires instead but can't destroy them, and otherwise still underestimate the MC.
5. MC fights back with lots of bullets and ramming.
6. Guy who attacks dies. If it is a girl, she or some other female victim either joins the crew or dies (in the latter case of course only the attacker dies).
7. Repeat.
I'd say the story needs some shaking up by now. Hopefully the author does exactly that in the next 400 chapters. I am about to find out.
Great story invested 150dollars of. Pins to read a story we novel features as finished.
Guess what the ending is missing what a f#=% tipoff
It's been 2 years so obviously nothing is getting wrapped up here.
Dont be fooled like I was there is no ending!
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It is past time for the MC to strengthen a paranormal squad. At the very least, he must give his sister the evolutionary liquid so that she becomes a level 2 pikashu.
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