GOOD JOB I HOPE TO SEE MORE
AND DONT BE DO DOWN ON YOURSELF TOO MUCH ITS PERFECT BECAUSE EVERY WRITER HAS THEIR OWN STYLE YA JUST NEED TO FIND YOUR WAY
*Rengoku style*
Super good start, I like it πππππππππππππππππππππππππππ the one hundred and forty characters makes me serious. PS Don't stop this book it's good
Justieif