You won me over at female assassin, very interesting father daughter relationship canβt wait to see how that turns out. I am enjoying your descriptions as well so not liking Jax already..great Job work Author.
Added to my library after reading the first chapter. I like how you set up the plot and it's definitely very interesting. The characters are cool AF and of course, your writing style really brings the plot along well. Looking forward to reading it all.
I must admit, I'm getting some "Money Heist" vibes from just reading the first chapter! This is an excellent work of literature imo, and would highly recommend it to anyone that's into the genre ππππ
One word...
**MAGNIFICENT**
I would've loved to gift this book but I don't have much apart from power stones.
Am so glad the book is completed, I can read to the endβ€β€
OMG THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I HAVE ENCOUNTER THIS KIND OF STORY IT IS SO GOOD THAT I WANT TO KEEP ON READING IT UNTIL THE END! THE PLOTS IS SO WONDERFUL KEEP WRITING AUTHOR!!
Multiple identities .. Nice. I just know that the plot will work out perfectly well. It's a good story, plus, it is written very well.. So, kudos to the author!! [img=update][img=recommend]
All the characters are real thing I guess. Well, the mistry and thriller vibe is on it's level. The more you read the more you go into it. Just start reading and go into it. It's really awesome.
This is so short yet enticing. I'm obsessed with the author's writing skills, born to be a writer and the story development is out of this world. It deserves the world's best review. Amazing job author.
It's something different from what i read but definitely like it . Few Grammatical errors here and there but the story is super good to keep on reading .I recommend it to everyone
I like the stories with strong female leads both mentally and physically and this MC have both. The writing is also easy to understand and very clear. I highly recommend to read this work
Just started and cant stop reading. Very intriguing. The plot and character development is amazing so far. I would really live to read more. Keep updating author!!
Wow, the synopsis is very eye catchy and this is gonna be an awesome book. I haven't gone much far but I enjoyed the chapters so far. This is a total recommendation for someone who is looking for an action thriller book. Good work author
Short, yet full of substance and entertainment. It went far above my expectations. This isn't just your typical crime novel - read it and thank me afterwards.
I really loved reading it. Amazing
Perfectly aligned word structure. beautiful writing and a great story.
and the love of mine for assassins have been greatly rebuild by reading this book. must read!
I love the back ground of the story. The excitement in the story starts from the very first chapter and draws you in. The writting quality and character development is amazing. Great work!!
I am actually in love with the writing style , very clear and an interesting plot which you shouldn't miss. I really enjoyed reading this work so it ends up in my collections . Looking forward to more chapters author.
I haven't read much yet but I just wanna say that this book is wonderful. The synopsis grabbed my attention and the story development is wonderful. Good job Author!
The detail!, the Accuracy and the events yet get you to want to know more. I love the book, I love the book! [img=update][img=update][img=update] great work
I am amazed. This is going, awesome author. Hooked on this book. Waiting for the new updates... Do update quickly cant wait for the next chapter. Overall, a good book to recommend with good writing skills.. Please keep it up:)
The world's background caught my attention right from the beginning. I was interested to see the life of a hitman's family.
The MC is a sniping prodigy that doesn't require a spotter's help to kill her targets from long distance. If that doesn't sound prodigious, I don't know what would. π
The heist mission with her team were so cool to read. The only thing that always killed to mood for me was how she always pumped into a human wall (3x in 8 chapters), some university jock, which made me question her instincts as a hitman many times.
There were some instances where MC's morals were questioned, for example, when she was upset that she killed a wrong target, an innocent person. Mind me, it wasn't her first kill. It made me think that she was not suited to be an assassin for hire, and that she should have fought against her family for a special ops or a military career instead. Who knows... she wanted her father's aknowledgment, so maybe she'll have some dark character development, and would become colder and colder as times goes be. Or maybe the author wanted to make her more likeable? Didn't work on me. I don't know...a 'good' assasin doesn't ring a good bell in my ears. Maybe my impression of killers for hire are just that twisted.π
For a dark background, her every day seems pretty normal. She goes to school like everyone else, has friends and enemies, goes to parties and etcetera.
Her relationship with her father is a bit strained. Her father wants to make up for his constant absence. Not the most overbearing and controlling man out there, the MC didn't fear him much and could even talk back without being punished. I concluded that he is not such a bad dad.
Sometimes her thoughts blended with the rest of the text, so one could mistake it and assume that it was a fourth wall break. π
The various relationship with different characters are interesting enough to make you read more and try find out the reason behind some of their actions.
Overall, good job.
Okay! I read through the work. It was an amazing job you did there. Just the first and second chapters gripped me harder than I had previously imagined. Nice storyline and satisfying pace. Great one...
Incredible story. I cant wait to finish the book and read more updated chapters. It gives you clear picture of what's happening and you feel being part of the story. I love it
This book is one of those, you know killing is wrong but you just can't stop reading it. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for Vaughn to find this elusive gem. I'm glad that this book is already complete so I can binge-read it and won't need to wait for the updates.
Very well written and has great story development. The wording is so smooth and intricate. The plot was very interesting, I like a strong lead female. Great job by the author
It's really an awesome story line. I love the title and the cover photo also brilliant. The synopsis really made me to read the story... Looking forward for more chapters π
Wow, a fascinating story that captures your heart. I got hooked when I read the synopsis and it just got better and better experience with each chapter. Absolutely perfection of writing uses of phrases, backdrop simple yet intriguing. You have die really great work. Kudos to the author. Power to you. ππβΊβΊ I nightly recommend this book to read by everyone.
Currently read through chapter 9. the plot seems intriguing from what I have read so far. Got me hooked and added to the library. A good read indeed,
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