Reviews of The Lust System

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4.3

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Elfriedenn
Hello Again! I read my last review, and it was too long so I've decided to change it. This is the first novel that I've written, and you will see a lot of things that you might not like. I will just say that I will try to write better every day. Next would be, if you are reading this, just enjoy the novel. If you're fine with it, continue reading and vote for the novel with Power Stones! If you don't like it, find other novels that you like or maybe DM me on discord for your suggestions/corrections. ==================== My website where you can read my latest chapters: Elfriedenn.home.blog There are around five free chapters available in there! If you want to read more than 15 Locked Advance Chapters in my website, you can find the Password on my Patreón: Patreón.com/Elfriedenn Note: Please read the tags in the description before reading. There are incest, rape, and many more tags in there. In case you get magically surprised, not expecting it. Discord: http://discord.gg/PdgErwK (If you have good suggestions and stuff, join here! Talking about how they hate the incest in my novel and useless things like that will be kicked from the group)
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JackTheRipper47
Great novel really starting to like it. Think it's gonna be great. Good, because that means you’re the right person to help us find the best holiday movie of all time.
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Aman_Shah_6324
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Shaban_Ally
Very interested and don't lock chapters because it is stupid let them all you just kep saying new chapter coming soon. Galway'skkdjoghkhfjfjjurdsxhjju jhfxgoppoigfioooohrwyjm zfyokf. Boitfcv bkoefgiooiuhvmooorssdvkooijhbsaqeuocxAwyookgsruokzaaweyj h fix it
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SpicySlimey
I'm going to be straight with you guys, i didn't read the novel yet, just before i wrote this review i have read the description and i can't seem to trust this, are we really going to believe that he is the first person to watch **** 10000 times, i can guarantee that there are countless people who did this, the requirement sould be atleast 100000 or 1000000, but I think 100000 is more manageable. Let's be real with ourselves we all know 10000 is not a lot.
1mth
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animeBrunette_girl
i love this book i never stopped reading it but i think we could improve a bit well not that my opinion counts other than that its amazing keep up the great work
1mth
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hybridgamer12345
Great story, please update. Also fun fact, did you know that a persons ass can stretch up to 20 cm, that a racoon can fit in it? Well its not true, I think. Don't try this.
1mth
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ThatsClassified
You know, Its kinda annoying when you meet 10 yr old fucking idiots that complain about not knowing how to read properly, and then complain because they cant read the tags, complaining that 'The story isn't progressing its just focused around ***' IT IS A FUCKING HENTAI NOVEL YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE TO READ THE TAGS JUST READ THE FUCKING TITLE Holy shit man
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JackTheRipper47
This is a pretty cool novel and it's fun to read, the scenes are a little short and the details are too few but it's not bad to pass the time with it
1mth
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AmD_Grinch
Love the novel very much❤. Don't know why you didn't continue writing it. Don't have much to say about the novel, (but loved it though). Hope you continue writing it
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2mth
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sdoryfider_2022
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
2mth
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Jonathan_durkee
very sexual and seems to be something to read, seems like a normal get a app that gives you powers but it's just all sexual arousal and how to pleasure women without them knowing, not bad just not good to do if it happened in real life....
3mth
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read3r_9030
really good story so far, wish you kept going. and writing more chapters I got way too attached too fast. stayed up the ENITYER night to keep reading it.
4mth
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Astral_Trinity_2449
Some of the women who mc ***** are not appearing in the story again for quite some time. He only spends time with his sister and most of the women don't have any time with him. They only appear for 2.3 chapters and disappear again for quite a while.
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RJIN
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JackTheRipper47
I just started but I think it looks great, the story is good enough. I like Dual Cultivation, The Sinful Life Of An Emperor, Profane Prince Of Domination, the story is also quite good there
4mth
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Transhumanist
The first 120 chapters were good enough. There is some interesting plot and some good smut. Worlr building was very badly done, we don't even know if the location is on Planet Earth. There are no information about other countries too so I really don't know if it is Earth. The parents are not present even after 170 chapters, and they are not dead but gone on a vacation or something, but they never phone or text for the entire story. The main character has a lower than normal iq with no common sense and street smarts. He doesn't have a long term plan for the whole story. Any reader should stop reading when they see the chapter with Evil Ghost Luo. 120th chapter or further. After that chapter nothing happens, writing quality drops somewhat and plot dies prematurely.
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4mth
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Skyder
you should continue posting here
4mth
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Everton_Mason
It would be a good story if it weren't for that mc. I honestly never saw a mc as dumb and unreal as this max, it's just ridiculous as he has no intelligence, useful ideas or imagination, I compare him with a puppet, because that's what he is, all ideas come from the system or from his sister , and he just wags his tail obeying. So the story is stuck in this idiocy instead of evolving the characters.
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Boitumelo_Oliphant
The story started well, it was attention - grabbing and lost plot. I was fascinated, enthralled and glued until chapter 130. The author can do well again. We are breathless in our expectations of the progression of the plot.
4mth
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Zachary_S_Wasson
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Obverse
Very well-written as to compared with the other novels in this genre. Very enjoyable to read, would definitely recommend to try this novel to read.
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aimanimi
Can you upload more chapter.................................................................................................................
5mth
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biplav_subedi
MC: “do you want sum fuk?” Beautiful lady: “Yes.” Thus, they had sum fuk.hfheeehheehehehheeeheheheh
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mur842
This is a very dumb story. The world, the actions of the heroes, the logic of their actions and reactions to what is happening are so unrealistic that you cannot imagine. The system is so imbalanced that you would quit this game in five minutes. It gives mega cool skills at the very beginning and mediocre then, destroying the idea of ​​development. There is no cultivation, only the will of the author and an endless combination of circumstances. Erotic scenes are so unrealistic. Poor girls have only three (one double) buttons and always maximum excitement (really, always 100%), while the partner acts only with an aura. And the main character is always ready to fight. (Yes, that's right, you already know who (or what) is the main character here) Summary. Read it as a farce, a comedy, a common sense tragedy. Prepare facepalms. You have been warned.
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chaosflame
Not really the best story so far but it's not bad either I haven't reached the end but the story hasn't been updated anymore so I hope it's done and not dead
5mth
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Sahurui
Thank you for the Novel, it’s super really good the MC is in the middle of his character development and has some super fun system. I hope you continue this novel for long. Seriously I’m so grateful having reading you work it’s so different from every novel I’ve ever read it has a lot of potential and many possible routes to go choose from. We know it's your first novel but continue improving since there'a so many loopholes on the story that could be filled with many possibilities and things to develop.
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biplav_subedi
Stability of Updates : No updates Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
5mth
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RandomGUY
It started off as something casual and fun to read until things slowly became serious and they started to just talk about how they should plan for their future and do this then that to show how smart they are. I'm disappointed.
5mth
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James_Pearson_6996
This book started out really well, loved the exotic writing. Now it is just dragging along. The MC keeps putting off becoming strong by getting more women. Now it not even lust just writing for filler.
6mth
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subedibiplav
Please update and I bet your each chapter have of potential of 5 star . I love this story. Suspense is killing more . Please come out of hiatus.View More
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