I am reading this comic and it is great I love it and give me ideas and clarification of my novel writing. please guys read the novel I have uploaded , support me and comment down your suggestions.
THE OBSIDIAN DESIRES- Dark Mafia Novel;
I've read up to chapter 549 on a different platform. Art style changes as it progresses, but the change is dramatic around chapters 100-150 (Bai's eye's also change from black to purple). Artist change, perhaps? Storyline becomes redundant. Bai puts her Mates in danger every story arch. They never fail to worship the ground she walks on, even on the verge of death, and they never question her selfish requests even at the risk of their lives. They have plot protection, so they don't die and the never-ending cycle repeats. I was also grossed out by her own son having romantic interest in her. I thought, "I'm invested, I'll keep reading" but I'm seriously questioning my sanity with that choice.
I've been monitoring this novel for the longest. When it's complete and the novel is free for all chapters please let me know. I can't keep spending and re-reading it over and over again. Love everything about it. Waiting for 4 years now for free chapters
Can someone please tell me when the story starts moving again? I’m at episode 368 and I hate spending three fast passes on each chapter when nothing happens. I love the plot, and the story used to be so interesting. But it’s at a complete standstill now. When do things start happening again?
I've read this story for a few years now and it's honestly the best one I've found on this app. Although I do wish I can read more than one chapter a day. Overall everything about it seems to be great.
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