I had trouble reading most of the text since the color was the same shade as the background.plus for what ever reason it was fairly dark for me as in like you turned your brightness down too low (not sure if that's on the author or the app itself)
This is a great manhua, but the story development starts becoming a little stale around chapter 200, and also, the ending left a little more to be desires. I believe the MCshouldhave traveled to the immortal world with his companions as it was so clearly emphasized in the beginning. The writer has a lot of scope to improve when it comes to story development.
I'm usually generous with my grade and would give 5 stars for effort alone, but this is some thing else, you can turn off your brain a bit if you want an enjoyable read, but the later half of it...yeah read it for yourselves
The quality of the drawing is great, would have liked to see more color when it came to the use of powers. Character design is really good but at a point when new characters were introduced it started to feel a little like copy-paste. When it came to the story development the flow of the story was smooth for the most part but having the main protagonist always talking about how he won't marry but he would be married to and then at the end with all his love interest there with him and only one kid did he not marry the other girls he loved if so why not if was always protecting them and what about the girl that was his first love in both his lives, the romantic part of the story is a little confusing at the end.
Dylukowolf