Webnovel Author: The_Pen - Novel Collection

The_Pen

5mth

Commented

This arc ruined it for me. Seems like the author just randomly killed him and ruined the system too. Never liked quest systems and works traveling. Just turned into an average power fantasy now.

ch 443 Unexpected turn of events

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

The_Pen

7mth

Commented

The main character is so dumb. Also it seems like you killed off the parents just to remove any attachments he might have.He can read and write, and should be good at basic stuff like maths, so him becoming a farmer makes no sense.Also the 7 years of no quests is more that you hadn't planned for that long, so you made a literal quest reward not even be a reward, since it's just his supervisor in a box...Seems like you are just writing with no direction or planning.

ch 0 6 CHAPTER 5

The_Pen

7mth

Replied to SCP_C2K

Nuke is way too strong. A hydrogen bomb like the Tsar Bomba can literally wipe out many cities. you can literally nuke the city next to him, and it would be too late for him to do anything. he would just be vaporized into nothing before he realized that the nuke had gone off.

[You were even confident that even if a nuclear bomb was sent to Lynn and your location, as long as you prepared beforehand, your power was enough to defend from the explosion and radiation of a nuclear bomb.]

World Travel Simulator System In Modern Society

Fantasy · ShadowKatake

The_Pen

7mth

Commented

Rip, the time travel basically ruined it.

ch 13 Secret Basement

Zombie Apocalypse: Creation

Fantasy · IPI

The_Pen

8mth

Posted

An interesting story, it's strange that it hasn't had that many views. Although it isn't the highest quality, I appreciate the effort it takes to write. And in this case, the story is slightly different to what we normally get from webnovel.

Heiko- Into the parallel worlds

Fantasy · RYK

The_Pen

8mth

Commented

This chapter felt like a fever dream.

ch 0 6 Chapter 4- Familiar yet unfamiliar

Heiko- Into the parallel worlds

Fantasy · RYK

The_Pen

8mth

Commented

Seems like an interesting story. Can't wait to read the rest.

ch 0 1 ???

Heiko- Into the parallel worlds

Fantasy · RYK

The_Pen

8mth

Replied to xLeafx

There is literally a tool called Prometheus for monitoring application containers...

It took Sarah a month to finally finish making everything ready and for them to start operation. The reason it took that long is because she was dealing with two massive projects at once, the acquisition of the law firm, and the hiring and training of new employees. As for the server farm for new product development, she decided to postpone it a little until everything is stabilized and in order.

Getting a Technology System in Modern Day

Sci-fi · Agent_047

The_Pen

8mth

Commented

This is just AI generated gibberish now. Terrible to read. Like eating a soup with too many ingredient.

ch 35 Moment of truth

The Eternal Family

Fantasy · FamishedGod

The_Pen

1yr

Commented

Not a fan of the merging memories. Seems like it was only done to give him objectives to complete.

ch 75 Memories

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

The_Pen

1yr

Replied to Psan

I agree. This story has so many inconsistencies. He only has one friend, and is antisocial, and even the friend he has he treats badly and doesn't care about her feelings. why would such a person agree to be a leader of a random village. Moreover a village that tried to kidnap him to use as a sacrifice. And in under 24 hours of even appearing in the planet. He literally got the power to travel at the speed of light. He can go to any place in the planet in a second.

ch 12 Give me One week!

Reincarnated with an Analysis system.

Fantasy · Kirito_K5

The_Pen

1yr

Replied to The_Pen

Also he blames the people looking at him when he's walking when he literally says he is staring at them while walking. I wouldn't be surprised that he was being bullied more for being super creepy rather than just having an F rating.

ch 10 Benjamin Kaminski (1)

BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

Fantasy · PilgrimJagger

The_Pen

1yr

Commented

this book would actually be good if the MC wasn't a psycho and if the author didn't name everything so strangely. quite a lot of the names just seem like you bashed the keyboard.

ch 10 Benjamin Kaminski (1)

BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

Fantasy · PilgrimJagger

The_Pen

1yr

Commented

Why does he act so much like a child, and keep on randomly stuttering? Really ruins the immersion.

ch 40 Leaving Home

SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar

Fantasy · Magecrafter

The_Pen

2yr

Replied to Egyptionbooties

Normally that would be true, but in your system, quests can give stats directly, so it no longer matters. Instead, completing as many quests as possible at a high rank matters more.