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Shoukoushi

1yr

Commented

Been a hot minute since I've logged in. Now they only allow access to chapters through the app? Ha! Yeah, I'm not coming back

ch 41 Xuanming Cauldron

I Inherit An Auction House At The Start, Trillion Times Rebate!

Eastern · Place of Belonging

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

Oooh, it's BTTH. I thought it was a Disney Mulan reference. "I am Yao. King of the Rock!"

"I am Yao… I mean, I am Zhang Xuan!" Zhang Xuan replied with a nod.

Library of Heaven's Path

Eastern · Heng Sao Tian Ya

Shoukoushi

2yr

Replied to LeWil

It always does. I still try. Eventually, one of them's going to actually not have their head up their rear

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Sign In: Becoming A Great Spell Deity Starting From The Magic Academy

Fantasy · Dr.Boom

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

Oh, no. I think this might be where I'm dropping the story. The whole "continuous pursuit and claiming ownership despite verbalized nonconsent" schtick is one of my biggest peeves

ch 407 I'm Back (1)

Genius Summoner

Fantasy · Like Snow 3000

Shoukoushi

2yr

Replied to Darkoneko

When her mother trained her to take care of Yuan's every need, it was only on toys and mannequins, so this was her actual first experience.

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

Moar. The whole 'innocent' spiel is starting to get old. It's got to go, even if you don't include scenes like this. But scenes like this can be opportunities for character growth, inter-character dynamics, etc. Or, ya know, just plain old fanservice. I'm in favor of the former, but whatever floats your boat

ch 483 Relieving His Pain

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Shoukoushi

2yr

Replied to Shoukoushi

Clarification, a squire is /usually/ (but not always) a non-firstborn son of a noble, or a merchant's son who paid for squireship in order to become a noble. As I understand it

Therefore, he chose [Knight's Servant].

Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard

Games · Chinese Blacksmith

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

So, to clarify. A war veteran's son grew up as a noble's servant, and became a squire. A veteran can be a lord (noble), but since he supposedly worked as a noble's servant, this was not the case. He became a squire. Fine. Climbing the social ladder. None of these reasons given actually make sense. It's a natural progression. You don't 'become a lord' because of a romantic breakup, a sense of adventure, or getting expelled by your family (in which case you would LOSE your status as a lord). Only a 'the desire for power and wealth', A.K.A. 'ambition) is a sufficient reason as stated here. A 'private feud' /may/ work, if the feud is between two higher-ranking nobles and the MC got promoted as a reward for some action taken in support of one of said nobles in said feud. Author's trying, but he has very little actual knowledge of this stuff.

[Why did you become a Lord?]

Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard

Games · Chinese Blacksmith

Shoukoushi

2yr

Replied to Sasa_Abokraza

Sort of like a lady-in-waiting. Assistant and support, but not a grunt

Therefore, he chose [Knight's Servant].

Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard

Games · Chinese Blacksmith

Shoukoushi

2yr

Replied to

A squire is more than just a servant. A squire is (usually) a nobel who is /working as an assistant in exchange for training to become a knight/. Higher than a footman, lower than a knight - and while a squire (temporarily) has the duties of a servant, their status is higher and they can fight.

Therefore, he chose [Knight's Servant].

Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard

Games · Chinese Blacksmith

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

I'm no expert, but I think "Knight squire" might be redundant. Just "Squire" might be bettter

[Knight squire]

Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard

Games · Chinese Blacksmith

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

Try "What were you in your youth?" or "Which choice describes your past?"

[What had you once been in your youth?]

Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard

Games · Chinese Blacksmith

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

"Advice of strategy." What. Try 'piece of advice' or just 'hint'

"(Don't waste time, quickly click and start. Please see: This is your first advice of strategy.)"

Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard

Games · Chinese Blacksmith

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

TF does 'regional module' mean? There was no attempt to make this sentence actually ok

"Next, I will begin adding regional modules for you to generate initial attributes…"

Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard

Games · Chinese Blacksmith

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

Poor writing /and/ poor editing. Strike Three. I'm done with this story

"You must have extraordinary value. If you have no value, why don't the powerful people use this money to support their mistresses?"

Starting With 3000 Special Agents' Protection

Urban · Shushu Xingxing

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

Yeah... no. You only find characters that talk like this in translated stories as a sort of hyperbole to show how dumb one character is and how arrogant the other is. Lazy writing. Getting old. Strike Two

"Science is more mysterious than politics," Doug Jones said lightly.

Starting With 3000 Special Agents' Protection

Urban · Shushu Xingxing

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

I"ve been trying reeeaally hard but this is dumb. Strike one

"I find a laboratory in the documents, but I don't know what the scientists are doing in this laboratory. It's even more mysterious than the nuclear button. As the highest leader of this country, I don't know what this research institute is built for. I'm very angry now."

Starting With 3000 Special Agents' Protection

Urban · Shushu Xingxing

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

Yeah, the author is throwing words together here lol. I know they get paid per word so they develop certain ways of phrasing things but he coulda gotten way more words outa this. This just makes it seem brainless

Some people were using pens to take notes while observing the strange beasts that looked like extraterrestrial creatures in the cages. That was the result of genetic sequencing cloning.

Starting With 3000 Special Agents' Protection

Urban · Shushu Xingxing

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

Here it comes. Here he is, to save the day! 🤮

A heavy collision was heard.

Complete Martial Arts Attributes

Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu

Shoukoushi

2yr

Commented

It seems to be a pretty common error so I'm assuming it's actually Chinese grammar, but 'winning' someone is incorrect in English. You "beat" them, or "defeated" them, etc

He knew that the other party won them in numbers. Besides, he also had a lady on his side.

Complete Martial Arts Attributes

Eastern · Don't Enter The Jianghu

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