Crater - Profile

Story has an interesting take on the game elements and the characters have been given more development than the average Chinese xianxia, but the story can get a bit annoying at times when things aren't properly explained. My biggest gripe, however, is the frequent spelling and grammar mistakes. Some of these should be easily caught with a basic word processor, but many others are homophones or just similar sounding words that are not at all related. If these were infrequent I wouldn't mind so much, but they often occur several times a chapter or even multiple times in a sentence to the point it becomes illegible. Going over some of these earlier chapters to fix these mistakes would probably be a good idea to retain new readers.