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This needs some editing. Some quotations start, and never end. It gets hard to distinguish the dialogue from the narration. "This is how it should start, and end; when someone is talking." 'This is the standardized notation for how thoughts(Internal Dialogue) are communicated in published stories.' -I'm not quite sure what this is, I think you use it to indicate internal dialogue, but usually, there isn't a closing mark, so...- There's some rough grammar, and poor word choice but it isn't a bad fic.

As depicted by someone, who's clearly never lived a life outside of themselves. Considering all you have to express are stereotypes, your opinion doesn't actually matter, does it?

Congrats, you earned it.

You're putting a lot of faith in a Webnovel translation being anywhere near accurate.

--> Complains about the metaphor of western saviors. --> Is from Canada. My sides are in orbit.

Good tidings to you as well. I Hope you live long and prosper. Forgive me for being so blunt.