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Soawn: Water. Water. One water.
20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering.
Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions.
The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel.
And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for?
From the pros, MC. Nice world.

But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.

Abyss Domination
4 months ago
Agree my friend, this isnt story but a lot of data, and i really regretably not to read your comment, my mistake View More

Soawn: Water. Water. One water.
20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering.
Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions.
The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel.
And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for?
From the pros, MC. Nice world.

But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.

Abyss Domination
4 months ago
Agree my friend, this isnt story but a lot of data, and i really regretably not to read your comment, my mistake View More

Soawn: Water. Water. One water.
20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering.
Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions.
The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel.
And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for?
From the pros, MC. Nice world.

But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.

Abyss Domination
4 months ago
Lol, yaeh agree, he is taking another leveel of foolishnes View More

Heretoc: You can clearly feel that the author is not writing this story for the story's sake, or for the need to create a masterpiece. He's just writing this for the word count and money. I don't have any problems with authors writing for money. I would call them foolish if they don't wrote for money. Lol. But this guy... He's just taking this to an another level. While chapters filled with repeated sentences and unnecessary descriptions. He contradicts himself every few chapter. I just hope that the story really improves after chapter 200-250, as some people claimed. The basis of the story could have created another great story.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C160
5 months ago
WTF... 2 chapters only talk about 2 mil point!!! Come here i give u whatever point u want!!! View More
Legend of the Mythological Genes · C152
6 months ago
Yeah, agree, wtf we vote for dropped novel View More

Azunyan: WTF... Why is a story that was dropped being picked up again??? And why the heck were we voting on it if it was a story that had been dropped and picked up again.

Cthulhu Gonfalon
6 months ago
Yeah, agree, wtf we vote for dropped novel View More

Azunyan: WTF... Why is a story that was dropped being picked up again??? And why the heck were we voting on it if it was a story that had been dropped and picked up again.

Cthulhu Gonfalon
6 months ago

MatGeper: Why cultivation? Why not high tech...

Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon · C43
8 months ago
Why cultivation? Why not high tech... View More
Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon · C43
8 months ago
Numpang lewat mas bro!!! View More
Doomsday Pillars · C2
8 months ago
Nice imagination, good work View More

Cocoa: When i read the title, i really thought that the scorpion was going to stab some monster anus and the anus exploded lol

Divine Beast Adventures · C103
9 months ago
Thanks my lord for your generous update View More
Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C0
9 months ago
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