Shad

1yr

Posted

The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.

Alternate World: I Started With Two SSS Templates

Urban · Cold Fried Anchovies

Shad

1yr

Posted

The story was good at the start but when thw upgrade of drone to have AI resulted in tranaforming the drone to iron man. It got stupid not only that various mc and dc characters emerge from transforming luxury cars that wasnt even there to begin with there not even machines anymore. Its not even worth it anymore this author also made some novels that has great idea but poor story

When Doomsday Comes, I Can Upgrade My Refuge Infinitely

Fantasy · Xuanting_Official

Shad

1yr

Posted

The story is too rushed making the story too clutered and annoying to read......................................................................................

Damn it! You Call This Beast Taming?

Eastern · Big Big Panda

Shad

1yr

Commented

Whats with the artefact is it on purpose

ch 10 A Taste Of Cultivation!

After Spending Money, I Became A Sword Saint.

Fantasy · Tyrone_Bedoire

Shad

1yr

Posted

Just too much inferiority complex oozing out. Just sad reading this cause all of the nationalistic propaganda destroys the fun in reading it

I Have the Alchemy Emperor in My Head

Eastern · Fu Xiaochen

Shad

2yr

Commented

I just cant understand why he cant recruit hot shots as they say in the novel? Due to them can surpass him isnt it impossible because everytime they advanced the master advances as well and get gift bags.

ch 0 7 Princess of the Great Zhou

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires

Shad

2yr

Commented

Thats grim....not a great start

ch 0 2 Chapter 2

In MHA With Madara’s powers

Anime & Comics · MyStomachHurts

Shad

2yr

Posted

Yeah this is getting ridiculous this novel throws out the basic common sense. A 8 year old kid can be held legally liable for a mortgage? Then there is child labour law but system mission is open a restaurant. How? At least the author made the MC legal age for it to make sense

I Am A Gourmet: Just Eight And You Want Me To Start A Roadside Stall?

Urban · Mapo Tofu

Shad

2yr

Commented

One more example of the chinese author not giving any basic common sense in making the novel

ch 0 1 Reincarnating into an eight-year-old child! Awakening the Master Chef System!

I Am A Gourmet: Just Eight And You Want Me To Start A Roadside Stall?

Urban · Mapo Tofu

Shad

2yr

Replied to LP_Sut

Yeah lately chinese novels throws out basic common sense when making a novel

ch 0 1 Reincarnating into an eight-year-old child! Awakening the Master Chef System!

I Am A Gourmet: Just Eight And You Want Me To Start A Roadside Stall?

Urban · Mapo Tofu

Shad

2yr

Commented

What about the info about souls and dying that he gonna post online

ch 40 Ambushed Part2

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Fantasy · Yolohy

Shad

2yr

Commented

All of that in a day

ch 36 Crouching Tigers and Hidden Dragons Part3

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

Shad

2yr

Commented

Looks like fk the stats and level up bonuses

ch 36 Crouching Tigers and Hidden Dragons Part3

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

Shad

2yr

Commented

Theres no lvl up notice. Its impossible that he's still lvl 1

ch 30 I have been waiting for you~

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

Shad

2yr

Commented

Where is the disvovery points and additional drops he mentioned

ch 18 Dragon's lair

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

Shad

2yr

Commented

Its stupid to say its hard to cultivate that octance blast cause he cultivated 3 meridians in 20 days worth of training. So i dont know the treshold of hard but i think the treshold or hard for the author is 1 or 2 days of not accomplishing anything but in a novel of martial arts that can be considered as easy

ch 0 5 Sparring Mode

Imparting My Cultivation To Beasts Gets Me 10,000X In Return!

Eastern · Juju Lost in the Fog

Shad

2yr

Commented

Theres a loophole in the system you can tranfer a days worth of cultivation and can get 2x to 10k times in return. Then he can just reinvest the return he got in a continued cycle and get more without the need to cultivate anymore

ch 0 3 10 Times Return!

Imparting My Cultivation To Beasts Gets Me 10,000X In Return!

Eastern · Juju Lost in the Fog

Shad

2yr

Commented

He doesnt get any skill from other survivor?

ch 31 Man, Battle

Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills

Sci-fi · 8k Dollar

Shad

2yr

Posted

A various of messy plots where even the first character to provoke the MC forgets the MC achievement every chapter that he was a part in. Its just annoying. Why did the novel author allowed these.

Almighty Master

· Boyi Comics

Shad

2yr

Replied to Ddraig99

Yeah but its different from the novel not in the good way but in a bad way

Rebirth of the Godly Prodigal

· Webnovel Comics

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When Doomsday Comes, I Can Upgrade My Refuge Infinitely

Damn it! You Call This Beast Taming?

After Spending Money, I Became A Sword Saint.

I Have the Alchemy Emperor in My Head

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

In MHA With Madara’s powers

I Am A Gourmet: Just Eight And You Want Me To Start A Roadside Stall?

I Am A Gourmet: Just Eight And You Want Me To Start A Roadside Stall?

I Am A Gourmet: Just Eight And You Want Me To Start A Roadside Stall?

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Imparting My Cultivation To Beasts Gets Me 10,000X In Return!

Imparting My Cultivation To Beasts Gets Me 10,000X In Return!

Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills

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