LIGHTDX

4mth

Replied to DemonsDescent

Wouldn't be good to let people to read like 20-30 chapters in order to see if they get hooked? I can't even read chapter 1 since it's asking me to pay, but while i like worldbuilding i'm not sure to spent 10 dolars for something i don't know if it's good enough, it may be different if i had read some of your work before but i didn't.

LIGHTDX

4mth

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Are you telling me the author doesn't even know he should allow to read a couple of chapters to hook?

Banished

LIGHTDX

4mth

Commented

She is really too kind, she belived him and is even helping him this much without reason.

"…Fine. I'll help you, but you can't go out looking like that. I'll go buy you something to wear, so you stay here and wait for me. I won't be gone for long, alright?"

I Wanted to Play a Strategy Game, But I Became King Instead!

Fantasy · Akashiro_sensei

LIGHTDX

4mth

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He said he was summoned, but he didn't say from where so even if she were to belive him (That she should not) it would be hard for her to understand he doesn't know magic and he didn't ask so is nor really the moment to explain that.

"Well, as you probably realized by now, magic exists in this world. It's divided into eight schools of magic: Protection, Conjuration, Divination, Enchantment, Elemental, Illusion, Necromancy and Transmutation. Each school has several sub-schools of magic. Conjuration magic – the type of magic used on you – is used by wizards, sorcerers or priests to summon familiars or the undead by using low-tier spells. However, the potency and type of spell like the one used on you is something I've never seen or heard of before. Whoever summoned you must be a very powerful magic user. Then again, I do not know that much about magic and I could be wrong about this. That being said, you should consider paying a visit to the Brurradale Royal Magic Academy as you might find some proper answers there."

I Wanted to Play a Strategy Game, But I Became King Instead!

Fantasy · Akashiro_sensei

LIGHTDX

4mth

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The bandits kidnapped him and danced in front of the sliming puting others at risk and still decided to forgive them, saved them and even then recruit them despite his own party objetions and the damage on the soldiers moral and loyalty, which means the risk of having those outweighed the advantages too.

Ash had judged that the risk of Damien shooting at their own forces outweighed the advantages of having him as a sniper.

I Became the Tyrant of a Defense Game

Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

Commented

And yet, Lucas could see him with no trouble.

The distance to the next 'area destruction' site was quite far from here.

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Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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Prolly in the same way Junior ended being the highest level on the team despite her sickness and not being in front while she have to be more careful of when using magic.

All of his skills were specialized for crafting, refining, and enchanting equipment. How the hell did he manage to reach level 55 with those skills?

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Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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It's a serpent, not a vampire. Don't go killing and reviving the serpent just like that. Plus, why the wyvern care about human favor? Also. Humands can't breed with monkeys why could with dragons? one thing is to go and make elves and dwards who at least looks like, but dragons is an other thing. Maybe, droping a drop of blood on a person to give them dragon like powers and stuff is fine, but isn't going too much a child? Is the author making a excuse to why could be useful to bring the duchess with ash when he previously said it was too much of a problem? For that he should just have keep the marriage thing even if saving the merchant guild. I'm starting to think Ash is responsable for the future where the duchy and the alien gods to destroy the empire.

It was said that the Emperor and Dusk Bringar grew so close that they had a child, leading to the birth of the Bringar Duchy... Anyway.

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Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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Considering he decided to not accept empire influence and even reject the other kingdom marriage union even thought the second thing wasn't directly related with the empire or the other kingdom influence while even trying to reclute the most wanted duchesse who is paramont to end a war it doesn't really seems like he care about the other kingdom much thought.

Sure, that would work for Crossroad. It would create a lot of issues for every other kingdom up north, though.

I Became the Tyrant of a Defense Game

Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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Interesting idea, but also means that it would be easy to raise multielemental mages for your war making them not so rare.

"They've been attacked by magic during their infancy."

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Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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But he turned a blind eye to the bandids after their second error.

This was the second time he had gone berserk. I couldn't turn a blind eye any longer.

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Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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Still, no matter how powerful is far-sight the user is a cleric rank N, so low stats and often bad stat oriented. He's cheat is made to be use of afar and guarded, but him being slow and weaker than a normal archer/gunman when precision is not the issue even with two weapons, but they can't close the difference? Lucas even have a skill for movement even that should be good enough to reach him before Damian could point to him...

Lucas and Evangeline were limited to suppressive attacks, whereas Damien was shooting to kill.

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Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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To be honest. Considering the state comes from blackqueen is weird it wasn't the first weapon he used. But since author is a softy i guess isn't that strange.

Once that happened, Damien would draw his last magic gun, Black Queen... and its massive firepower would inevitably draw blood from someone.

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Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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Says the guy who is looking for levl 50 and late game stuff at first year. It could be balance?

'Why is it showing up in the first year? This thing usually appears in the second year at the earliest!'

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Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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Too naive. They may have killed on the spot or she may spare only one as vengance. Her country is mostly finished. It would only continue the bloodbath some more if it were come to said. At most it could cause the other countries to be more aware, but would that really help her in any form? Also, the elf race is in the empire. If they were to talk and cause tension i'm sure the emperor would kill all their elves. I don't get the protagonist any more.

"By sparing us, you'll have witnesses for the future. To prove that the Everblack Empire deliberately caused this war by assassinating their own ambassador."

I Became the Tyrant of a Defense Game

Fantasy · Zeom

LIGHTDX

4mth

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Again Ash said this was bad idea because it cause desertion but still went with it in the shadows? Even if he was giving some autonomy hiding such target is too much. A few members is one thing, but the wanted duchess is a whole diferent thing, let alone offer to help them. The empire may even attack him and there could never be trust with here. Not to mention that for someone who doesn't wand anyone to die this badly sending them of all people is close to asking them to suicide. Also there is still empire soldiers at home. At least he should have waited until later.

"The third prince of the Everblack Imperial Family, who is currently in charge of the southern front of the empire, says he'll provide refuge and assist in rebuilding if I escape there?"