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TrueStrike

TrueStrike

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2017-11-02 Joined United States

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Clearly you need more practice with using flying thunder god in combat. Once you’ve placed that seal on someone it’s gg. You should never need to counter anything straight on like this.
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The impact creates a shockwave, that let's cars fly away and both of our arms are flung back. However, it's clear, that I took more damage, if my broken arm is anything to go by.

[Marvel:Naruto Template System]

[Marvel:Naruto Template System]

Anime & Comics · AceTheHonoredOne

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Bella? Bella!?
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"What's her name mom?" I ask while still looking at my sister. "Isabelle Carter or just Izzy for short." She says while looking at her.

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[Marvel:Naruto Template System]

Anime & Comics · AceTheHonoredOne

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The first sentence in this paragraph reads like the droid is inside his nanosuit and not how you intend for it to be. You’ve already established that he’s wearing the suit. So it’s not needed to repeat again.
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Star Wars: Skywalker

Star Wars: Skywalker

Movies · Link_Id

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Kai Carter. A bit of an odd combination. But it could’ve been worse. Could’ve been Bob Uchiha.
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"What are you going to name him miss Carter?" asks the nurse while looking at me. "Kai. Kai Carter." says my mother.

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[Marvel:Naruto Template System]

Anime & Comics · AceTheHonoredOne

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Wow. What happen? First 2 paragraphs started so well with nice and proper looking sentences. Punctuations we’re in the right places. Things that needed to be capitallized were capitalized. It’s Like you forgot your basic English for the rest of the chapter. Or stopped trying.
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Replied to LegendaryChaos
Nope pretty sure he just has a shitty friend that likes to drug his drinks.
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''Forest? Did John again put the fucking drugs on my drink? Last time I ended up at Washington, now where the fuck am I?'' Jack felt another headache coming.

Ghost Rider in Twilight

Ghost Rider in Twilight

Movies · Alekzi

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Earth having higher gravity would make everything on it denser and shorter. Humans, vamps, werewolves. There would be no exception. But since only the vamps are “dense” it’s not the gravity but simply a built in feature of their race. What’s The actual physical Cause? Who knows. Also who cares?

After sorting memories I went downstairs to have my breakfast and then returned to my room. The first thing I did was check my psychic abilities . I used a pen and concentrated on it willing it to float. it took me few hours to make a slight movement. It was pretty hard and needed to be trained. The next thing I did was start a light workout which I plan on keep increasing with the coming years and learning all sorts of martial arts and make some money privately which will come on a later date. And thus started my days of training my powers and waiting for the start of canon.

My Twilight Story

My Twilight Story

Movies · CryingJoker

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You mean his slashing hand is all right.
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He lost an arm but it didn't affect his strength much since his main slashing hand was right.

Naruto: The Template System

Naruto: The Template System

Anime & Comics · Navy_King

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He’s just going make an entire magical discipline Just like that? On the spot in only 6 hours? Are you sure his power isn’t Arc of Embodiment instead? We all know that Occlumency is the magical art of protecting your mind from mental attack. But how does he even knows how to do it in practice. And doesn’t The practice of Occlumency Also requires you to get attacks repeatedly In order to build up the defense?
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Rinnegan twilight

Rinnegan twilight

Movies · UnknownGod94

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