Aswong

3yr

Posted

Reading 3 chapters in, I can see the silhouette of Ultraman. I can see this as a unique inspiration for a novel due to I haven't read a similar one. However, that is the only good thing about this novel. International audience are gonna read this. Undermining the ability of your audience country is a chinese propaganda. We don't need it. Hope webnovel would pick better novels to translate and not wade too much on political propaganda.

Aswong

3yr

Replied to Rivet

it was not that large to be ripped if you know what i mean 😂😂😂😂

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Aswong

3yr

Commented

don't think so. we live in a computer generated simulation.

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Aswong

3yr

Commented

ultraman

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Aswong

3yr

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oh. We make mental picture when we are reading. I haven't put karens in that image. The dialogues in this novel can really sicken if you think about it.

The customers who he rejected earlier were infuriated when they saw Zhang Zhi added the phrase. They criticized him, scolded him ceaselessly, the saliva from their mouths spewed as they scolded, wetting the entrance of the blacksmith.

The Magical Blacksmith

Eastern · Time Seaweed

Aswong

3yr

Replied to Aswong

go to site mtlnovel.com they have large number of mtled novels

The Magical Blacksmith

Eastern · Time Seaweed

Aswong

3yr

Posted

3 chapters in and the smell of chinese nationalists flies. I didn't continue after that. I know what this novel will become. This novel is gonna be serve to an international audience. It is good to appreciate chinese culture and values but to demean others and probably put them in camps and exploit them for free labor is not. In conclusion, I don't recommend this novel. This is just culturally insensitive.

I Have A Divine Tree In My Heart

Eastern · King of Torch

Aswong

3yr

Commented

cough2x. Educational reform really makes it better.

However, China was different. It had been somewhat chaotic at the beginning of the Spirit Energy Revival. However, as more and more powerful figures had emerged, especially in the army, the whole country had embraced the red banner once again.

I Have A Divine Tree In My Heart

Eastern · King of Torch

Aswong

3yr

Commented

Lin Yao had even tried entering a slaughterhouse, spending some money, and killing some pigs. However, he still had not attained any energy. He had then realized that ordinary methods were totally useless.

I Have A Divine Tree In My Heart

Eastern · King of Torch

Aswong

3yr

Posted

I can see a glimpse of brilliance within these novel but failed to capitalize it. This novel could have been better which is really unfortunate. I have read in mtl up to 80 chapters and this novel was dropped by the author with 1279 chapter. Just the dropped status will give it 1 star review on updating stability. The novel has really interesting stuff like a good system. However, the dialogues and character design lowers the quality of this novel. It gets really boring.

Conquer a Mountain And Become The Great King

Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui

Aswong

3yr

Posted

I have read up to chapter 25 so I can't say for the whole novel if it went better. The novel is completed with only 450 chapters. The novel just isn't that interesting enough for me to waste my time to read that much chapters. This is the main problem with this novel. It is tiresome to read which leads to to the audience tired to invest time in reading this novel. There is also the common problem with the dialogues. The medium of the novel is the writing. We can't see how they talk but can only imagine it with how the author writes. Having overreaction and unrealistic dialogues makes the characters in the novel dumber and makes you imagine that they have screw loose. It tried to be comedic but just failed. This won't gather enough readers to make it viable to translate especially with how much chapters it only have.

The Magical Blacksmith

Eastern · Time Seaweed

Aswong

3yr

Commented

They are talking personally. This dialogue looks like they are trash talking online. Seriously.

Zhang Zhi did not plan on leaving Lingtai Town in the foreseeable future, so he did not take the threats seriously.

The Magical Blacksmith

Eastern · Time Seaweed

Aswong

3yr

Commented

I'm not sure if these should be a normal reaction but i'm pretty sure most people would just move on and won't do something like this. Is this a normal chinese reaction?

The customers who he rejected earlier were infuriated when they saw Zhang Zhi added the phrase. They criticized him, scolded him ceaselessly, the saliva from their mouths spewed as they scolded, wetting the entrance of the blacksmith.

The Magical Blacksmith

Eastern · Time Seaweed

Aswong

3yr

Commented

just shut the **** up system

"As the future God of Forging, how can you coward out? Just fight him if he doesn't agree with the price!" the system said in his head.

The Magical Blacksmith

Eastern · Time Seaweed

Aswong

3yr

Commented

Just the first chapter and i'm having a headache. Is this how chinese talk? Overreacting and exaggeration of someones talks sounds like someone has a screw loose.

ch 0 1 Forging System

The Magical Blacksmith

Eastern · Time Seaweed

Aswong

3yr

Replied to Mumbajumba

yeah. A talkative system is not really nice omen. It is like having a customer service agent all the time.

"My host, you don't need to worry about your mental state, I, the system, truly exist in you! My full name is Forging System and I am here to help you, my host, to become the God of Forging.