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Yeh i liked it to, one of the better ones to come out of trial reads

Enjoyable storybuilding but severely needs an editor, feels like it could use grammar work done. honestly don’t understand how its got so many 5 stars 🙂

It feels like it needs to be broken into smaller paragraphs. The spacing isnt great, the grammar isnt great either, and feels like a bad harry potter copy. It is unique in some ways and i think it has its good points, so goodluck author all the best

Yeh my exact thoughts to

Not to spoil anything but as of (30) now is has come close but not yet. It feels like it might take 100 chapters, not that that’s a bad thing tho.

Simply- humorous and witty with a regular game world, but expect laughs. The world is complex and is as you would expect of a game world, simple mechanics that work for any game novel, levels, monsters and pretty ladies 👀 The characters seem fleshed out as can be in 20 chapters, its very interesting and the humour had me laughing. So just for that i would recommend reading it The MC isnt a simp either which always helps

It is a little bIt but not the main theme

Yeh same its literally the only book from trial reads that im still reading and spending coins on to this day

$10,000 how could i say no

Cut and paste of binding to geniusses, if you have read it before it just feels all the same 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

Yeh i started to have a strange sense of deja vu, checks out