Cetus

2yr

Commented

"and therefore, no tomorrow" rhymed.

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Cetus

2yr

Replied to Einstein3

He is mostly a coward cookie

(I mean the way he looked at Nat, like she is a monster, Ironic from a guy who rampages through cities)

Cetus

2yr

Commented

Does it write in his genes that he is destined to be a referee as well? Is it specific to American Football?

"Here is the coin we will be flipping today." The Head Referee continued to speak, stretching out a beautifully designed coin that was about half the width of his palm. "On one side we have a football decorated with the flag of the fallen American Empire. This will be tails.

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

Cetus

2yr

Replied to a_wizard_did_it

I think the most important part is that public should see him as a dark lord whether he is evil or not. Regarding 7th year, I think having a Grindelwald arc would be good, either being mentored by him or fighting against him, away from Nathan so that canon is somewhat intact.

ch 147 A Bloody Yule Ball

Harry Potter and the Boy Who Lived

Book&Literature · a_wizard_did_it

Cetus

2yr

Replied to Ryan_Colman

Then the shampoo shouldn't have worked either? Is he a chemist? How does he know all the ingredients and process?

Honestly I can make quite a few things, the problem with creating something from your imagination is that you have to know exactly how it works. I tried to make a phone however it wouldnt fucking turn on. As for my clothes I kind of just copied them from what I was wearing.

What? I'm bored.

Anime & Comics · Ryan_Colman

Cetus

2yr

Commented

Doesn't Rogue kill others unintentionally when touching them? Is this a version of her with good control of her ability?

"Rogue." Power and memory thieving? Get.

What? I'm bored.

Anime & Comics · Ryan_Colman

Cetus

2yr

Commented

It would be funny if no cars came and he killed the kid by throwing him

As the street wasn't the peaceful type. He was rammed by a speeding car which was rammed from behind by another one.

Gold Experience(GER) in DC

Anime & Comics · Hancock_Sama

Cetus

2yr

Commented

I was wondering how they would think of Harry as a future Dark Lord. Casting an unforgivable? A slap on the wrist is fine. Getting along with Kreacher though? Definite Dark Lord material right there.

ch 121 Expanding Horizons

Harry Potter and the Boy Who Lived

Book&Literature · a_wizard_did_it

Cetus

2yr

Commented

You should make hagakure a boy to counter it.

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My Hero Academia: Altered World

Anime & Comics · TrapsAreNotGay

Cetus

2yr

Commented

Wasn't it always American counties?

'Manchester Smash!' He sent an axe kick straight to the robot's head, completely pulverizing its head.

My Hero Academia: Altered World

Anime & Comics · TrapsAreNotGay

Cetus

2yr

Replied to AarconReix

She can't magically control her creations though. If she created flames without anything to hold them, she would just burn herself to death.

All Might was about to continue attacking when Momo pressed her hands forward and created a wave of flames from her palm.

My Hero Academia: Altered World

Anime & Comics · TrapsAreNotGay

Cetus

2yr

Commented

Ottoman's formed in the end of 13th century and became an empire at 15th.

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Harry Potter and the Boy Who Lived

Book&Literature · a_wizard_did_it

Cetus

2yr

Commented

I wonder if Quirrel doesn't stutter when Voldi takes control of him and Harry doesn't notice, or it's too hard to write a paragraph of him stuttering and author didn't bother?

"I believe he will," Quirrell said. "I have also written a letter of recommendation for the Highmaster, and I will attach it to the same owl you send your letter with. Together, they should be enough to at least have Karkaroff accept you as a potential candidate. I'm sure that once he sees your first term scores he will have no choice but to let you attend Durmstrang."

Harry Potter and the Boy Who Lived

Book&Literature · a_wizard_did_it

Cetus

2yr

Commented

Is he really 9 years old? I've seen more mature talking 6 year olds.

He was a 9-year-old kid and basically had no privacy. So, his mummy entered after knocking. It didn't give Magnus enough time to completely hide the sheets. All he was able to do was throw it under the bed. But now the wet body mark was visible on the mattress.

Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

Cetus

2yr

Commented

It should be Great Britain and Ireland i think

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Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

Cetus

2yr

Commented

Does he not need Kaiser Dragon's card to make the fusion?

Perfect! Number one was the other half used with Fairy Dragon to make Kaiser Dragon. It could work as a decent beat stick

Stacking The Deck (Yugioh GX Insert)

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Cetus

2yr

Replied to GnomeBob

Make the MC someone living in the Marvel world? Most stories start before 2008 so he can know about Star-Wars movies but doesn't have Marvel Metaknowledge.

My Avenger Jedi SI fic ended up with a few problems when I tried writing it. If I go with an actual Jedi, he ends up negotiating everything meaning no action. Hydra/Shield sends him to destroy some rebels trying to topple a terrible dictator, he has the rebels disband and 'coincidently through unrelated means,' the dictator steps down. Stuff like that, so there are very few times he even needs to pull out his lightsaber. My writing style ends up having such scenes become terribly bland if done one after another, so my only real option is to turn it into something of a crack-fic where Hydra and many others try to manipulate or kill the Jedi but it always goes wrong for them. Please comment if that is something you might have an interest in reading, or if you have another idea on how to make a jedi working for Shield do something besides using diplomacy on everything.

Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer

Book&Literature · GnomeBob

Cetus

2yr

Commented

Wasn't he putting weapons into his inventory to understand them? Rocket should know he has an interdimensional space.

Once the ship arrived at its destination and landed, Harry gave Rocket the number to what was basically a voice mail box Harry claimed he'd check once every couple of days and went on his way after filling his inventory with his share of the weapons. Though Rocket didn't see Harry take them and assumed Goose had eaten them when he wasn't looking.