SlothDaddy

2yr

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I haven't said anything, but he never tanned that hide, so he probably smelled horrible the whole time, might want a shower

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

can't be used continuously*

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

exuding* keeping his screams in*

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

I'm picturing Sasuke and Naruto here

SlothDaddy

2yr

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do you have a friend or family member who could read it? just a fresh set of eyes could help most of the mistakes I've noticed

The champion realm of the wind element was wind whisperer and they could make a wind domain. In the wind domain, the user would gain better control over the wind and the power of his or her spells would significantly increase.

My Space-Time System

Fantasy · xImpulse

SlothDaddy

2yr

Replied to xImpulse

yes, it was the beginning of chapter 88

My Space-Time System

Fantasy · xImpulse

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

it was called a klye before, might wanna edit that

My Space-Time System

Fantasy · xImpulse

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

you might want to ask someone to be your editor, or if you already have one, fire them and get a new one

My Space-Time System

Fantasy · xImpulse

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

probably mean to say confirmed his hunch

My Space-Time System

Fantasy · xImpulse

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

I like how Blake thought, 'Blake thought.'

My Space-Time System

Fantasy · xImpulse

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

I guess Kade is Natsu Dragneel "lunching" on those flames

My Space-Time System

Fantasy · xImpulse

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

Didn't he send that to his mom?

William went to his closet and selected the sleeveless black training uniform that he had prepared beforehand. This was the same uniform that he had used during his training in Lont and it was made from the pelt of the Thunder Horned Wolf that he had defeated ages ago.

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Fantasy · Elyon

SlothDaddy

2yr

Commented

From the context around the phrase, I'm pretty sure everytime you say "Sometime later," you mean "Shortly after." But I could be wrong.

Sometime later, Long Yijun left the scene and returned to the sect master's headquarters, where a couple of figures could be seen gathered outside the door.