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Replied to MrIIIo

He said the epicenter, meaning the point between the 4 center placements of the board, meaning it's not an actual allowed move. Basically, he is breaking the rules, implying the MC is an outside context problem the Vandel could not foresee.

"You've underestimated the complexity of the game too much, old friend," Lex murmured to himself, a smirk playing on his lips. "A single piece has escaped your notice..."

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Normally, I can't stand reading an OC insert, but the way the game system delivers little hints makes it far more bearable. In that, it reminds me of Lord Roustabout's Brockton's Celestial Forge. While the Mc is played as dense for humor, they do tend to at least realize in hindsight the implications of their interactions quickly enough, making it easily bearable. The gamer system had also been reduced to only the most approachable aspects it is known for. As of chapter 5, I've been enjoying what content there is and genuinely look forward to updates.

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Book&Literature · Daddy

Oleem

1yr

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I'll read whatever you end up writing but neither of the two seem that interesting apart from being about the first time you are using an old world fantasy setting. I would like to see you write using a druid-like powerset actually. Maybe stranded on ff7?

ch 56 Quick Question

In Cyberpunk With Fallout System

Video Games · JManM

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huh I remember Doctor Who said that second line also

"Waller ark in this story brings up two of my favorite sayings: 1- the road to hell is paved with good intentions. 2- good men don't need rules, pray you don't find out why I have so many."

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

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think hosting a live auction with sufficient evidence using some bodies could cause the war to screech to a halt at least temporarily?

What would you guys use a bunch of dead alien bodies for?

In Cyberpunk With Fallout System

Video Games · JManM

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1yr

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nice! I appreciate that their is actually consequences and retaliation for the actions of the MC. Can we get some interludes for other pov? These last 3 or 4 chapters seem a little disjointed. In a way it reminds me of of the montage at the beginning of the game.

ch 11 The Battle of The Crossroads

In Cyberpunk With Fallout System

Video Games · JManM

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Sort of, the MC'S had a very strange response to the armed riders and Lord Stark's group. Ask yourself, would you ever let a group encircle you with spears if you had a better option? If you have a short tower with one entrance would you ever think you would rather face a group of aggressive riders out side of it? Would that even cross your mind?

Should I?

Oleem

1yr

Commented

toads they have a full system for attempting to gain sage mode. I think they also helped seal the rabbit goddess originally, right?

ch 0 9 Quick Vote

Son of Jiraiya and Zabuza's Waifu Adventure

Anime & Comics · JManM

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I can't relate. It's very difficult for me to get into other games after dark souls.

It was like playing a game on easy mode, after playing Dark Soul for hours.

Oleem

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I hate this bike, always popping up when you search anything with r-18.

I smiled as I felt the breeze hit my face. I was riding my brand new BMW R-18 bike on the outskirts of Gotham past the Trigate bridge with no particular purpose in mind other than enjoying myself after I finished my training for the day.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

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if it's about a paragraph I'll read the author's notes but if I have to scroll down I'm out

ch 0 1 Go Back... TO THE BEGINING!

Return of the Krogan

Video Games · JManM

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At this point is Lilith aware all the known sirens are grouped up except her? I want to see a scene where she learns that.

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Rogue of Borderlands

Video Games · GrimsReaper

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obviously choice. "go after" is vague enough that I could rules lawyer my way out of it not even factoring in free will.

It was a standard survey with basic questions and once in a while, there were weird questions too like 'Would you rather die or go after an underaged girl?'.

Marvel: A New Avenger

Movies · Extra26

Oleem

2yr

Replied to MagnuS

it's not mentioned that the MC changed his handwriting for the notes. Your projecting intelligence on an otherwise stupid character. There are a hundred things he "could" have done but didn't. There are likely thousands of examples of "weak" quirks being misunderstand befor being used to great effect. If you base your entire profession on quirk misuse then that's not something an investigation will just dismiss.

~Kaito Kid

MHA: Code

Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda

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2yr

Replied to MagnuS

they wouldn't know. No one could. Regardless, it's their job to investigate and with the aid of an extremely useful clue. Two samples of handwriting and a direction to investigate concerning a possible age group. All things that didn't need to be disclosed.

~Kaito Kid

MHA: Code

Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda

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2yr

Replied to MagnuS

does it matter if his quark has been shown to hack since he has demonstrated he can on his own through programming competitions? Again, who would expect a eight year old to be capable of the theft in the first place? Why needlessly draw attention to it for the lols?

~Kaito Kid

MHA: Code

Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda

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2yr

Replied to Jdj222

that worked! thanks

ch 47 Meeting father

Godly crafter in DxD

Anime & Comics · Mangadonf

Oleem

2yr

Replied to joker_shit

In a world with 99% powered individuals you think they won't follow through on an investigation. Just because of a suspect's age or public persona? Let me put it this way, you have a local kid that very publicity compeats in both programing and martial arts, even their quark has something to do with computer uplink. That's not something you just dismiss out of hand, that's a likely suspect.

~Kaito Kid

MHA: Code

Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda

Oleem

2yr

Commented

the mirror dimension is a strange one to miss. It's a power that can no sell nearly anyone in the MCU. Even Thanos would be helpless there.

"Well, I am off to teach Emily how to access the mirror dimension, a class you skipped," The Ancient One winked, teleporting out of sight.

MARVEL: GAMER PATH

Movies · CORNBRINGER

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2yr

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he already has time dilation right? Can he only use it for sex and not paperwork?

Her being by my side has helped increase my efficiency so much that instead of half my day being taken up by my duties as a lord, only a quarter of it was now taken.

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