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What a good find. I 'm quite suprise of the unexpected plot development, a hard one to pull off. I hope you can maintain the pacing and plot progression of the story. I think you really need to edit the some chapters at the start. There are some errors in writing that I think you can change for better reading experience. The character development is quiite fast, but it become better. Thank you for the stroy. Hoping for more chapters to come.

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ch 28 Wei Chen's choice

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ch 27 Wei Chen and his grandfather

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ch 26 shopping

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ch 25 ingraving spells

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ch 24 Divine sense and sea of consciousness

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ch 23 military competition

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ch 22 Returning

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ch 21 progress report

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ch 20 True Purpose Of Body Training

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ch 19 Prelude Of The Devil Instructor

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ch 18 Wei Chen grandfather

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ch 16 Cure, Knowledge and New Dungeons

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ch 17 Anxious Wei Chen

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ch 17 Anxious Wei Chen

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ch 16 Progress An Huge Battle

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ch 15 Preparations and yang god method

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ch 14 Wei Chen visiting

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ch 13 6th of qi refining and collection of elemental spell

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