MummyLord - Profile

Ok. so, the story is quite good and interesting the world background is also intriguing. however, comes the writing quality, which is simply garbage! the author couldn't do worse than that. its not just about the grammar and spelling or the repeated paragraphs at the start of each chapter. the story's consistency is also ruined by messing the stats of the MC (the mc loses stats the more he levels up-the author forgets his past numbers). Well, Author if you are reading this, please revisit your writing style and try keeping a log of what you provide in each chapter. aside from that i really enjoyed reading the story but you somehow managed to ruin it for me up to this moment. i'll try investing a little more time in. Sorry for the rude notes if any.

why did u not continue writing this novel? Just wondering what made u stop such a very good and promising story. the plot so far is good and unique, the story is really good but all to no avail.