Lord_Sammael - Profile

Disclaimer: this is my own personal opinion of this "novel" (your own milage may wary). Well where to begin... First of all someone get this MC in to protective custody cause there's some serious domestic abuse going on here. Second issue is the grammar. Not sure if English is the authors second language, but I'm betting it is. Well to be fair the chapters are legible, but the word structuring tells me the author doesn't have a clear grasp of proper English grammar. Which is unfortunate and therefore lowers the writing quality grade. Thirdly the plot armor is so thick you can use it to build a castle with it. This is also compounded by the fact that the MC does not have any quality that speaks to me as a reader. He is a pathetic weak spineless nobody only there to make the side characters more interesting. There are interesting things about this novel to be sure. If the novel was about Silva or Klea as the MC I would probably gave found it to be more interesting, but alas... This is what I am stuck with. writing quality 1/5 story development 2/5 (slow isn't always the best) character design 2/5 (mainly side characters carrying this one) updating stability 3/5 world background 3/5 (interesting premise but loses out because of the MC)

This is one of few novels I can recommend. I only have two gripes: The grammar needs work and there aren't enough chapters to read avaliable. on a serious note though, the grammar needs work. It is not terrible and is readable but could be improved. I like the mystery element of the novel. How did the MC end up transmigrating to the ship? What is actually going on? Who is the hidden enemy? Lastly I was not expecting the relationship with Alexis to go the way it did, but as Palpatine says: "A surprise to be sure but a welcome one" anyway to end my review I can say this is one of the better novels on here... for now (as of chapter 93) depends on where the author takes it from here.

I like the premise and the world building. though the MC unfortunately is very 2 dimensional. He doesn't really grow as a person and has the emotional spectrum of an eggplant throughout the story. He acts like he's still a player or an observer if you will. Even his eventual relationship with a certain character is told as an aside. Though I can probably chalk this up as the limit of the authors writing skill. Supporting characters are good and some of them are even quite good. Lastly I felt the ending was rather weak. But overall this novel is a decent read.

This novel is decent at best. The story is intriguing and the characters are interesting. Personally I like Aurora and Hila. however the MC is one of the most one dimensional characters I've seen. he experiences no character growth at all. he gets flung into a game log horizon style and is forced to live his life in the game world. But he never reflects on it and treats the entire world as if it still was a game to him, which is very strange. He also does not form any real bonds or attachments to anything or anyone. the novel emphasizes that he is now a npc and that he has to experience everything with the filters that he had as a player disabled. So I find it very strange that he has spent more than two decades in the game and is still the same as when he started. no growth or development at all. This is a shame because it could have brought the novel to the next level if there was at least some development on the MC's part. But alas we are stuck with this shallow novel which at most will draw out a smirk from the reader. I mean if you want something to fill the time and doesn't really require you to use your brain give it a go. But if you're looking for something deeper this isn't it. Maybe try out Lord of the Mysteries instead.

No

mediocre at best. dumb MC, mattress quality women that literally throws themselves at the MC, reeks of nationalism, discount fallout world and resident evil plot. had potential to at least be interesting but unfortunately that went down the drain real fast.