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CaptainBoyHole: This original thought that somewhat swayed the creation of this chapter was a counter strike video i watched with a very angry russian cursing as he was being griefed.

Craftsman System In My Hero Academia · C59
3 hours ago

Flat_Moon: Reading this chapter hurts but it so fulfilling. Thanks

Ultimate Fruit · C24
3 hours ago

LordOfGluttony: If it was me in this Situation I don‘t think I could go after chooper began to cry...... Lucas has nerve of steel to ignore a crying chooper

Ultimate Fruit · C24
3 hours ago

Imbreak: You know, I actually stopped writing at that point. I got up, went to bed, and rolled around screaming at my pillow....eventually, I still wrote it 😅

Ultimate Fruit · C24
3 hours ago
MOREEEEEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEe View More
Ultimate Fruit · C24
3 hours ago
Reading Status: C41
One of the best fanfic that I have read. The thought process of the stories also good and smooth. load the story is like a water flows so smoothly. . . . . . . . . . . . . . View More
Gifting this Unfortunate Guy with Blessings
5 hours ago

Banana_Bomb: TL;DR in my eyes, its carefully planned, so far that is, and a reasonable filler here and there. Glad you, dear author, keeps longevity in mind and a proper plot progression plan. Those who have not noticed, Doulo Dalu arc has a few time skip, so keep your "dragging" rant in your own pocket dimension.

-wall of text version
eh, seems okay, not feeling dragged at all, like some DBZ episode, or some Detective Conan that become a running joke at a certain point.

If I ever guess it right, the first arch was to gain experience and mostly plot forwarding, also setting in the foundation, hence the barren wasteland situation in narutoverse

bleach is more like him playing, or acting and probably trying to gain experience as a commander.

in this one, he is building a forward base, all things considered, the author has military background, the inner working of a forward base must be familiar.

also, you can go, I have power that makes me right because MIGHT bull**** route, go to a world smash everything in a few chapter and be done with it, rinse and repeat for other world, and that will last you for how many chapter?
eventually the story becomes bland, as a writer you will limit yourself, essentially cutting your own plot in half.

it was already clear how he conquers and how he builds up his kingdom/empire since naruto, not as a tyrant.

also if you go MIGHT IS RIGHT yada yada yada, why not just write a CN novel and publish it in printed books.

sometimes people just wont let their mind enjoy the story and be bothered by the many harem/tyrant MC.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C139
6 hours ago

LordAlmighty: The point isn’t to use power for everything thats not how the world works plus that ability won’t be useful against everyone in this plane because of their powerful souls and strong mental strength. Also I did explain that this would be a important world and I haven’t dragged anything. In fact im going at the pace I want to.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C139
6 hours ago

LordAlmighty: Just let me write my story man.

The Path of the Great Sovereign · C139
6 hours ago

southgamez: I plan for Soren to be the "Mihawk" of Luffy's crew unless you guys wanna see Soren form his own crew

Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C74
6 hours ago

southgamez: A man of coulture I see

Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C74
6 hours ago

HuskyWarrior: *Transfers all those boosts to south so he can make more chapters*

*TRANSFER*

Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C74
6 hours ago

southgamez: I feel really threatened, but sadly you forgot to hit *TRANSFER* with your *BOOST*s there, better luck next time buddy

Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C74
6 hours ago

D_King1998: Wonder if Joker will bow before Hisoka?

A New Path · C168
23 hours ago

Vallori: You're welcome! And the mass release will most likely be around 50-60 chapters. So the more chapters that become, the longer the break is gonna be for me until the next arc comes out. Just something to keep in mind. :) Thank you for reading and giving your input!

A New Path · C167
23 hours ago

animes_vitions: Great, we have a f*cking retarded mc who can't keep his d*ck inside his pants

Exploring another World with a System · C25
23 hours ago
MOREEEE EPICNESSSSSS View More
The Most OP'est Titan (AOT fanfic) · C34
1 day ago

Lucky_OP_God: Just hope that the couple somehow survived

Rebirth of the Godly Prodigal · C731
1 day ago

SnowofBlood: Evening, first thing to say, excellent chapter.
For the 3rd person speech I really like that it's 100% Doom. Sage force is also a very good idea, very few use it in fanfic but it as a lot of potential.
With this chapter we saw that even with the sage force ( telekinesis, telepathy ) he wasn't a match for kryptonian, he got kryptonite and I'm sure he will find a good use to it but don't forget magic, kryptonian are vulnerable to it and Doom is a master sorcerer. It will add versatility in his abilities, that could be really interesting but maybe it's too soon.
When he stood face to face with Supergirl and Superman, you really did a good job in showing how powerless and how terrifying he would be for a normal human, when she used her super strength to hold him ... It probably make him extremely furious, I would have been.
For now I hope he keep building his power, becoming better in using the sage force, maybe he will reach a stade when he can disintegrate people, " he who hesitate disintegrate " . And now that he got a motherbox he can make some very powerful thing in the future.
I dont know if he have a higher objective but he could have the project of creating mutant or metahuman in large quantity, for the evolution of mankind, or something big like that. I guess we'll see in the next chapters
Thank you for your work, it's a story worth it. Bye 😈

Brightest Doom · C4
2 days ago

TouchMe_If_YouCan: Aight, dont worry about it brudah, all of us have lives to take care so yeh xd just dont give up on this, this is gold , betters for you grandmother ^^ (where are your powers ainz sama? you cant crontol one's life with such a mere tought? xd)

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C49
2 days ago

Hellequin90: Sorry to hear about your grandmother. I hope she gets to feeling better soon. Thanks for the update. Keep up the great work!

The Immortal Mutant Teen · C49
2 days ago

Facx: You'll see him around chilling at Mount Justice when they come back.

A Glitch In The System(DC) · C41
2 days ago

Touya_Dono: He should take kaguya not kill her. I mean she only wanted to protect the people from other otsutsuki but was sealed by her sons

The Sharingan Hyuga · C111
2 days ago

ADS: Why everyone want to kill kaguya ? She is just poor women who want to protect her son from her clan, but betrayed by all human and her son :(

The Sharingan Hyuga · C111
2 days ago
At least you tried your best ill support youno matter what thanks for the chappy View More
Gifting this Unfortunate Guy with Blessings · C38
2 days ago
Taga buhat at ambag si orlando View More
Exploring another World with a System · C20
2 days ago
Thanks for the chappyyy <# View More
The Sharingan Hyuga · C107
4 days ago
Nccccccc Thanks for the chappy <3333333333333333333333333333333 View More
A Glitch In The System(DC) · C39
4 days ago
If you want the god of death in your back do it, he’s the son of death View More

Thoth0: Can we please drop Conan into a volcano?

Start by Becoming a Mangaka · C766
5 days ago

I_love_Rem: Chapter comments will be displayed in comments section of author and if you are using website, goft comments are blue in color and chapter comments are white in color... I mostly use website on pc... So I found your comment white in color...

Reborn in DxD with OP Barrier and Enhancement Magic · C99
5 days ago
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