Erobyss

1yr

Commented

At the beginning your father/uncle put massive debt on you and we’re doing business to make money but now you stealing from a city which protects 1000s of people for your own selfish greed. Your character is far worse than the bearded man you took revenge on. Absolute trash character.

A few minutes later, Tang Zhen put these runestones into his storage space. He had already gathered all the materials needed to build the city Tower and could build it at any time.

I Have A City In An Alternate World

Sci-fi · Han Mubai

Erobyss

1yr

Commented

It states you haven’t seen your mom in 7 years in an earlier line. Also she doesn’t die for four years and you only went back 7 years doesn’t that mean that you just ignored her existence for 4 years. If your character died at 32 that would make more sense because that would be 7 years after her death. Otherwise this makes your character look uncaring and unloving.

Reincarnating to 1st Jan 2100..... Now 21 ....Fate gave him the chance to change his destiny .

MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master

Games · Raj_Shah_7152

Erobyss

1yr

Commented

Surprise surprise recently mentions about how he hasn’t had a reason to increase his training…now he does plot armor to the rescue

ch 912 Innate blocked meridians (1)

God-tier Farm

Urban · Gentleness In A Steel Gun

Erobyss

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 1215 Sometimes, Science Is More Than Just an Idea

Scholar's Advanced Technological System

Urban · Morning Star LL

Erobyss

2yr

Commented

Because the author didn’t manage the month properly he lacks time to finish the mission with in the month. FIrst day at seekers guild learns hunters exam is 2 weeks off, so he hustles 1 day to b rank, 3 days in kunlun mountains, 3 days prepping and dealing with one shadow, then message and meeting with seekers guild, then 3 week prep training arc, when there should be only 1 week and 2 days since you skip the first exam. So instead of being able to open the shop and finish the quest he should fail due to authors lack of time management

ch 397 Chapter 397: Before the exam

Cultivation Pet Shop

Eastern · DXHaseoXD

Erobyss

2yr

Commented

Question he was given 1 month to open pet shop, first day up to b rank, next was a 3 day mission then 3 days to deal with one shadow now 3 weeks for the hunter exam I feel like that’s the whole month there, also at one point you said hunter exam was only 2 weeks off and that was his first day at the seekers guild. Someone seems to just toss numbers out without thinking of true ramifications.

During the next three weeks, Lin Fan didn't go out at all. He just locked himself in and focused purely on three things, training his pets, cultivating, and refining pills.