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Ascension of the elder · C142
Ascension of the elder · C141
Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer · C90
TimE: This is a really good novel, one of the better ones in the current list. And it has blacksmithing!
Immortal Path to Heaven · C60
Monster Integration · C780
Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C269
Mysterious_Pandora: No guns and bikes. Also I think you went too far with the whole reactions thing. I mean Sam threatened them, but it's not like something super serious happened and sam became a monster or something. He did the right thing. He can cripple tons of nobles in a tournament without fearing the consequences and now a threat is not good?
Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer · C72
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Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer · C72
TerrestrialOverlor: The summary is this:
You are overdoing the ordinariness of the mc
Every step takes way too long
You minimize the mcs effort by making others immediately catch up or surpass him
The secret realm was a waste. He only powered up a little.
Looking at everything he's been through till now if he makes it to a powerful level it would be because of plot armor. He's supposedly not extra smart his bird is ****ty and it's repeated over and over.
He's basically hopeless, even his father is outstripping him. Everyone that used his magic medicine got way out of it than him. You went through the trouble of describing the complexity of his engine and it has done nothing for him. Like nothing at all.
You keep teasing with various love interests and it just vanishes into nothing. Stop teasing if there's going to be nothing to come of it.Monster Integration · C228
Seuss03: So, there could be many reasons, I'll just outline my feelings on the story.
First, it's a cool premise, integrating with a monster for strength, but the MC literally, and admittedly, made one of the worst choices possible, because his pet was cute. He was supposedly scouted by the big organizations, but refused because he wanted to use this bird, even though in the story he said you can use other creatures, but your first determines your potential. Since he's kept this bird as a pet for years, why wouldn't he just continue to do so?
Speaking of said bird, it's supposed to be getting strangely more intelligent, but all it does is throw tantrums if he doesn't buy it food and ignore him, literally blocking off their connection. What part of this bird is meant to be redeeming? If it doesn't show growth, and besides that is a selfish brat with zero potential, why in the world should I care about it?
Also, I'm willing to allow time for the plot to develop. I had no problem with the secret realm arc, but some threads have been left dangling. Why is he in such a hurry to rank up, when he should be working on runes, totems, and seals? He's determined to enter this competition in a few years time, but again, you chose this bird with no idea how to break the genetic limit, yet assumed you'd make it. As far as he knew, he would never find a way to do so. But rather than focus on his hidden advantage of the runes, which may contain some help, or seek advice from his father, who is literally researching and quickly advancing through the seals, he would rather do everything on his own. He's either kinda stupid, or extremely forgetful, and if it's the latter, that's kind of on the author.
Finally, significantly, is the editing. The beginning of the story is truly painful, and new readers could be forgiven thinking it's that way all the way through. Missing words, repeated words, bad grammar, and jokes I'm guessing don't translate well, plus an mc that seems a bit dim doesn't translate to new readers. If possible, you really need to clean up the beginning of your story. And the problems still continue.
I've really only kept reading for the hope of him creating totem armor and weapons, but the pacing makes that a dim prospect. Again, your premise is interesting, and for those clamoring for more releases, you can ignore them; two per day is plenty of writing. But you do need to seriously improve your editing if at all possible. Aside from that, as others have said, tournament arcs usually see a decline, as many people let it build up to finish in one go. I've often done this. All the best, I hope some of this helps. It's given constructively, I hope.Monster Integration · C228
Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer · C71
Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C199
Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C135
Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C85
Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer · C63
Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer · C62
Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer · C61
Ascension of the elder · C125
Ascension of the elder · C1
Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer · C56
Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer · C46
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C576
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C540
Divine Beast Adventures · C575
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C518
