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That's not even the problem, first you gave him a broken energy too early, the way this was presented was random, and last but not least:Do you really think that something that has become a common thing in the world even though it was created by an Archangel could be destroyed like this? I know you are the one writing but you must understand that concepts that spread throughout the world usually become some kind of law, and as you described the line is something karmic,and if you understood or researched at least you would see that karma doesn't get rid of like that,in other words, you are creating something that literally has no meaning, because no matter what it is, everything follows laws in both the fictional and real world.

Well, the MC has several, several, several problems,he is arrogant to the point of being irritating, he takes powers out of nowhere,in 5-6 chapters it breaks the red string of destiny that was created by an archangel and is considered unbreakable,seriously, he is following the concept of The Extra Novel and Author POV only those without creativity and with a great desire to make the MC strong without meaning, if you want to read something like that read the two I mentioned, and not this poorly made thing

To be honest, don't read this, the author sounds like a child complaining about everything and any criticism he posts in the chapter complaining like a child,the system is seriously broken, the stats are ridiculous things like Physique of 10 Kakashi (1 Guy) and chakra control of 1 Tsunade with just a few months of "training", with each limit break like 1,2,5,10 etc until reaching 8-9 for type: physical, chakra, fuuinjutsu etc the MC wins a draw that gives him some skill in the same category,The problem is that they are generally considered strong skills from another world,each chapter is him complaining about someone and being honest, even my assessment is in danger of disappearing... this fic is nothing more than a self-insertion and wish fulfillment,the characters like Ayame that he mentions was never said when she appeared,the ages of characters are not defined, for example Yugao who in the same chapter is 14 years old then 12 and then 14 again, Anko who is 9 then 12 then 14 years old,he says he "fixed" the Chinese fic he used as "inspiration"but even with the strong Chinese influence of the "original fic" she is better, so in short: - Author who acts like a child and does not accept criticism - He doesn't even have control over basic things about the characters, age, etc. - Write the way you want because as he says himself "I am the author" and everything happens as he wants - MC without personality, and weak an d bad story If what you want a NSFW Naruto fic there are others a thousand times better in this site, don't read this And yes, I predict that within a few chapters released after I make this review the author will have a child tantrum in some chapter, I don't know how this is so well rated,but if it were posted on another site it wouldn't even have 2 stars in reviews

Finally someone sane,and seriously, the lack of investigation of the story by the author literally makes me skip many paragraphs

The app now has a translation... but it takes a long time