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hieryn: Will Daniel arrive in time before the girls are taken to the Spiritual Emperor????!!!Sovereign of the Karmic System · C470
Sakuroi: Considering the chapter before this, I wouldn't say that makes much sense. Xie Haiyang already hinted at being from some trade universe and in the last chapter Baole's senior brother said "I've finally found you", while Xie Haiyang knows Baole for quite some time now.A World Worth Protecting · C606
World Domination System · C982
Kupkake03: Well, whatever Daniel plans on doing to these greedy morons is definitely deserved. He needs to make an example of these people to make it clear to the entire universe what happens when you mess with his people or students. He should have done this a long time ago and made it more public.
The best way to handle this is, with one other person who is filming this(Or this universes equivalent of filming) he needs to show up massacre anyone who gets in his way and then steal the planet. Then say that anyone who touches his students will be killed by him and then be forced to give him some kind of compensation. So if you want to kindly hand over your rare objects to Daniel, feel free to go after his people. Something along the lines of that way with maybe some mercy thrown in depending on who he runs into. However, people need to die and in the most efficient shock and awe way that he has available to him.Sovereign of the Karmic System · C433
Fearofthedark: Actually, military airplanes and fighters today can cost billions and billions of American dollars, let alone the Chinese dollar.Swallowed Star · C102
Fringus_Inanis: If the Sophos are Monsters, there is a high probability that they have monster cores. If so, couldn't they manipulate them to allow reproduction. The school have the skill necessary to do it. Even if they are worried that it would enslave some to others, Anthony has done the same thing to his mother who, because he didn't reconstruct her core, is still independent, i.e. not under Anthony's control.Chrysalis · C414
Spirit_BugXO: MC needs a brain. Claims it was his master who made it, then proceeds to tell her "I need time to make it" as an excuse. 🇫➖🇺➖🇨➖🇰➖🇮➖🇳➖🇬 HellElixir Supplier · C24
keepreroll: this chapter show how chinese do subtle corruption practiceElixir Supplier · C9
Shyboy: Brick dumb Mc. He just put a red target in the hill, he should just pry for the remaining time and let the dust settle and then extend or try another field while he has his own and contract others. He just made everyone think that he has found a golden mine and can't let go. Author patches things to just let a conflict after another coming for himElixir Supplier · C9
EternalCircle: It sounds like when the dungeon turned them from "species" to "dungeon creature" they were striped of reproductive organs entirety. Anthony's colony for example, needs to evolve in a very specific "child creation only" path, the queen. This also seems specific to ants, as ants (possibly other insects like bees) have specific genetic traits even within one colony to differentiate.
So it is likely that the sophos had no evolution equivalent to an ant queen, and tinkering with their own species cores would be a blasphemous act. Especially considering they seem to REALLY not like having become a "dungeon creature." Anthony also never considered how everything reproduces, it seems no dungeon creature can... ehem... "manually reproduce." Only by the dungeon spawning them with mana can they be made.Chrysalis · C413
HappyFawn: While we’re on the subject tho idk if you guys remember but Izroth said that the no 1 cultivator went missing and no one knew his whereabouts so what if he’s the dude in the tube and the game is a way to bring cultivators to this world and that’s the purpose of the combat master class? 🤔🤔Realm of Myths and Legends · C390
ShouldBeStudying: Exaclt my thoughts. And on top of that what retard assasins have a discussion with their target before assasinationSoaring of Galaxia · C1
NoveliEnthusiast: How is this not premium yet?Legend of the Mythological Genes · C331
Galaktos: Now Dave will bring the kraken and show then how a real undead fights in the seaRise of The Undead Legion · C347
LongSongGolden: So are their powers just a big game to iewah? He just sets weird conditions and then grants them a slightly larger fraction of his god like power? Seems odd that all his children would have the same system style with just different variations, and yet none of them can ever beat their "father"Sovereign of the Karmic System · C290
Oskisama: Boy, that escalated quicklyReincarnating Into A Fantasy World as an Autonomous Machine Arsenal · C19
TheAmbrosius: Looking back upgrading the system cost 1 billion... He has 43 billion ishhh... Well damn. Btw does remember if he has setup his planet the system gifted to him? That should be useful right? Hmmmm....Sovereign of the Karmic System · C239
Shadizar: Ah the comedy, I wonder just what increasing points in validation would actually mean though.My Extraordinary Achievements · C34
Pizzavu: Inspirational, inspiration, inspiration. It is hard to write quality chapters and he was obviously(?) doing research for the novel by watching that horror movie.My Extraordinary Achievements · C31
alwaysareader: With those kind of authors U want to open their heads to see if their brain is still working or what the heck.
The worst part is that everyday UR pressing F5 to see if there's and update in the slow moving novel that got U crazy 4 more.
SOB! have I bcame a M for coming back for more everyday.
Tnks 4 da chapter.My Extraordinary Achievements · C31
MrArky: If life only is that easy.The Sovereignty System · C0
Just_a_person: So, overall the story is good, but there are some complaints I have.
First, this is minor, but please title the chapters, even if it’s something ******, cuz it’s annoying to see unnamed chapters, not knowing what it contains.
Second, spirit food. I have no problem with spirit food at all, but selling it like normal grocery would produce many problems.
Spirit food isn’t a natural thing in the world, according to the system. So, many people would be suspicious about this, maybe even some old monsters would be interested
Supply and demand. If the amount of supply increases, then the demand decreases, meaning less money. You gotta keep a balance, so u can get the most benefits. However, this is not the only problem. Merchants and other businesses that includes selling spiritual plants and stuff like that will most likely get less profit due to him selling spiritual food and attracting their customers. This will cause enmity between him and powerful people, as people that could sell those are probably powerful.
Third, monetary circulation. Many people miss this in their novels if they include monetary exchange in systems. He is taking out money from the world and giving/buying things from the system. This may lead to a disaster in the economy if this continues. Money usually doesn’t disappear from the world. Money is circulated through buying and selling generally. The gold coins in the world is probably not unlimited. If he keeps sucking away those coins without giving any back, then it will lead to an imbalance.
Fourth, the autonomous buildings. These are nice, but can provide problems too. They practically render the humans useless, kind of. Well, he doesn’t need farmers, miners, blacksmiths, researchers, etc. There are few jobs available for the people. One of em is a guard, but there might be something in the system that can guard his kingdom, so thats probably occupied too. These should be a bit limited to prevent freeloading people.
Well, those are all the major ones I could find, the rest doesn’t really affect the story that much. Well, u don’t have to change ur previous chapters, just do stuff that can fix these in future chapters, if u want.
It is your story, so do what u want. I’m enjoying it so far.The Sovereignty System
Termax: I am sorry, but I just do not have the time or creativity to devote to chapter titles. The first story I ever wrote I attempted to use title chapters and it was very frustrating trying to come up with a title to match the story and would delay the release of the chapter because of it.
Another problem is there are many chapters where Ben will only build or make new products so what shall I name a chapter for example: Ben builds up the fortress, Ben builds up the fortress again, and Yet again Ben is building up the fortress.
Another problem with chapter titles are they tend to be spoilers to many readers. Why would you want to know what is going to happen before you read it? It is like going to a forum to read all the spoilers before you go watch the movie.
My main issue though is I have a job and write when I get home. I only have so much time to devote to writing after I come home not including other RL distractions and delays.
If writing was my main job it I could take the time to sit down and discuss the story more with the readers like this and put more effort into my writing.
I really do want to make the story as enjoyable as I can for everyone who reads and sticks around to support it. I am only one person trying to think up interesting situations and encounters and editing them to be as readable as possible with my terrible grammar.
I spend just as much time editing these chapters and rereading them multiple times as I do coming up with new ideas to push the story forward.
As far as the spirit foods goes by Ben controlling it this will most definitely create enmity with the other merchants and nobles and is bound to cause friction. I also understand there is only so many people in a city who can buy the food to the point his business will stop growing. Without spoiling anything I can only say the spirit food will not be the only draw to his stores and this store will not be the only business Ben establishes in the future.
In the end I know you are frustrated with me not adding titles to my chapters and I have seen your comments about it. It just isn't possible for me to provide them and I am sorry to anyone else out there who is disappointed in me for not providing them.
Thank you for reading my story even if it hasn't met up to everyone's reading requirements! I do appreciate you taking the time give it a try!The Sovereignty System
killofall: A little late to ask this but what are the real world counterparts of country F. Moro. And Xin?I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C831
antely1980: vasodilation.... no one is going to remember thatSovereign of the Karmic System · C0
Flowers77: He has the same last name as the war godSupreme Uprising · C12
Daoist_Kermit: Wasn’t the old version of him back in earth having a job so most likely over 18...that’s some pedophiliaWhy Did You Summon Me？ · C2
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