Marukusius - Profile

As someone who read these 60ch that were first released these are my comments: The overall story is good, i like the background of the novel and the potencial of the story is great, sadly the author has fallen short, as the story progresses it becames more clear that the author is just writing about something that for him sound right, but it's utter hogwash. I can move from that maybe authors real world and ours differ so i can overlook his inability in that aspect, but we are then presented with characters, not just MC but all the supporting cast, they are for the lack of better word soulless, no in depth perspective in them, in a matter of a couple of chapters MC goes from an introvert to a confident man of value that everybody needs to look at, as for the supporting characters they get relegated to Yes-men and goffers pretty quick without reason, author did try to show us how MC is thinking in a chapter but it sounds and reads really shallow. So far this novel seems like mishmash of things that look cool that author likes, without even a bit research and effort to explain some thing by the author, the story moves haphazardly all in an effort to glorify the MC. My personal oppinion aside, you can read the novel and maybe even enjoy it, but i would be suprised if you could get hooked by it as it is sorely lacking.