kodamaD

4mth

Posted

It is the first fan fict I read and boy..I think the author is deleting all the bad reviews.The novel is not to my taste, but I can not imagine how it can be 4.7 stars.I am giving this 5 stars so that the author does not read it, and whoever read it goes into with bleach, ready to wash their eyes.

kodamaD

1yr

Commented

That reminds me of a french song: "Ce matin, un lapin a tué un chasseur. C'étais un lapin, avec son fusil". Translated: "This morning, a rabbit killed a hunter. It was a rabbit, with its gun". I wonder if it was an inspiration from this kid fable.

At that moment, Lumian felt like he was a hunter, hunting in the mountains with his weapon and comrades, only to discover that the rabbit opposite him was clutching a water-cooled machine gun and targeting them. He considered it ridiculous and immersion-breaking, as well as disappointing.

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

kodamaD

1yr

Posted

Interesting novel. I noticed a significant amount of grammatical error. I am willing to help you edit for free if you want. This will allow you to concentrate on the writing. I like the novel, and every chapter is short enough to not make the story drag on.

The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

kodamaD

1yr

Replied to Kiyan_Tribe

Man... This is an eroge

'Looks like conquering her will be easier than I thought,' I thought.

The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

kodamaD

2yr

Commented

Apparently IQ doesn't mean anything in this novel apart from improving Aether control. I think I will name it plot IQ (where the MC is much smarter due to plot armor despite havng yhe same IQ as everyone else).

ch 276 Lu Yan's Waking up

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

kodamaD

2yr

Commented

How did no one comment on that hint of a saving grace?

[On the other hand, the Oracle is not all-powerful. It is possible that the concept of an immortal soul as you conceive it exists. But even the Oracle cannot verify these claims. Again, this is a matter of personal faith.]

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

kodamaD

2yr

Commented

Well... As far as I know, the title for the god of poverty is still vacant.

"I owe Miss Messenger 10,000 gold coins again…" Klein retracted his gaze and raised his right hand to rub his temples.

Lord of Mysteries

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

kodamaD

2yr

Commented

This sound eerily sinilar to what Klen encountered on Mt Honaris

These cocoons were gently swaying, wrapping different souls. They looked to be of all descents—African, Asian, Caucasians, etc. Some were wearing jeans, others holding cell phones. Some had beautiful clothes, others having beautiful facial features. All of them had the aura as though they were living, but their eyes were tightly closed.

Lord of Mysteries

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

kodamaD

2yr

Replied to harabuta

Law of beyonders characteristic convergence and... welll it will all make sense later.

Second, he wasn't sure how strong the Son of the Creator, Adam, was. Klein had no reference point, and he believed that it wasn't impossible for a King of Angels like him to subdue 0-08, imprison the Red Angel evil spirit, and kill Ince Zangwill alone!

Lord of Mysteries

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

kodamaD

2yr

Commented

Great novel. It was funny and unexpected at times. My only qualm with it is that there are too many forgettable chapters. While a 10 chapter long battle seems like a good idea, it is plain boring as the amount of details that is important to the story can be summed up in 1 chapter. This is the thing that makes me quit popular Chinese novels like ISSTH where battles are 20+ chapters long. It is just my opinion though. If you want the story to improve in quality it is important to put less filler chapters ( in terms to pseudo cultivation information) which are easily dismissed in the future.

ch 35 Looking For A Second Opinion

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Fantasy · Elyon

kodamaD

2yr

Replied to SirLobo93

I disagree with you. It is comparing a reckon team which has a small amount of units to a full battalion. Or team of land surveyor for archeological aims to a full team ready to excavate fossils. When the dangers and terrain are unknown, it would be more productive to have small teams to cover a wide range of areas to minimize risk. I.e. Don't put all your eggs in one basket.

At this point, Jiang Baimian paused, and her expression turned serious. "Compared to an ordinary combat unit, the Investigation Unit for the Cause of the Old World's Destruction might face greater danger. Why are there so many small teams that take on the same mission? It's because there was only one Old Task Force in the past with many members. Then, during an investigation, they disappeared completely. No one returned. The losses were tragic and difficult to make up for."

Embers Ad Infinitum

Sci-fi · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

kodamaD

2yr

Replied to At_Tokis

I don't think scholars teaches about the outside world else throughout history lords and kings would have not been so ignorsnt consistently. Scholarly teaching could be about poems, calculations, philosophy, and other tif bits of science.

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Birth of the Demonic Sword

Eastern · Eveofchaos

kodamaD

2yr

Commented

ff14 marketplace bidding war in a nutshell. Ubdercut by 100gil everytime

Yuan raised an eyebrow at Du Hai's words, as he truly didn't understand why Du Hai would be upset about that. "Is there something wrong with that?"

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

kodamaD

2yr

Replied to DragonAmongMen6942

The strongest system. Hilarious novel btw.

"Alchemists are medical experts that craft special medicine with their Cultivation, usually in the form of pills. Every pill has a different effect. Some can increase your strength while others can boost your stamina. Pills are usually expensive, so it's not an exaggeration to say they make gold..."

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

kodamaD

2yr

Commented

I always thought these were novel cliche but once I got to university, I saw people who had obnoxious attitude changes talking as I they stand on top of everyone else once they got a hold of some power.

"What's wrong with you, Na Ying? Are you perhaps charmed by this kid? Hahaha! I wonder how the disciples at Azure Phoenix Sect will react once they learn of this!" Lian Rong continued laughing.

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

kodamaD

2yr

Replied to DragonAmongMen6942

That could work. But then again, he has been crippled with the only interactions he had is with his Sister. He ce, I doubt he even knows what pop/gaming culture in that world is. In addition, the fact that is only trying to have fun instead of thinking of how to make money in the game or irl shows his lack of knowledge

"Were you even watching just now? He handed me a Blood Ape Monster Core worth over 100 gold coins without batting an eyelid because I gave him two silvers! That is not something even I would do! He must be testing people on purpose!"

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

kodamaD

2yr

Commented

I hope he act like this is an basic rpg so he'll just go into everybuilding looting stuff thinking it is a game

"Wow… they all carry swords with them…" Yuan's eyes flickered with excitement. He couldn't be more excited at this moment. In his eyes, this place was just begging for him to explore!

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

kodamaD

2yr

Commented

wait.. whose ball are they playing with again?

And without further ado, the two began playing throwing ball, and soon after, the merry laughter of a joyous little girl would echo in the forest.

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

kodamaD

3yr

Replied to Ereaes

If you are using only one hand then I will volunteer my hand to cover the other side

Before this trip, Roland helped her change from her raggy robe, allegedly the Taquila uniform, into his own clothes. A T-shirt and shorts were unisex and so there was no problem for Phyllis to wear them. Oddly enough, those cheap clothes looked rather casual and fashionable on her. It seemed a person's appearance could make the ugly become beautiful. The only problem was the bra. In the end, Roland had to request Zero to wrap a cloth around her chest to solve the issue.