MaskedGods
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Lord_of_Winter: MC right now:
Smack that, all on the floor
Smack that, give me some more
Smack that, 'till you get sore
Smack that, oh oowooh ooh oohProfane Prince of Domination · C18
Devil_Paragon: *shrug* I never minded giving head to a girl that'd just received my dick, but hey, I guess I'm just a degenerate.
Profane Prince of Domination · C5
Readerboy333: Hand speed damn that would help a lot when fappi**
*Cough* working ..yes working yeah ,yeah what else could it be?? YeahMy Extraordinary Achievements · C1
RobynHood: It seems that Yi Yun's true legacy after his ascension has arrived!
I Might Be A Fake Cultivator · C44
rindou69: Good way to avoid playing money.....btw, can u teach me the duplication method?
Chat Group For Magicians · C46
IronRiver: Bruh, how do you just walk up to someone and go "Nice, now you're number two!"?
Spirit Immortal · C482
golddragon: Someone would have to pay me for Sakura to be a romance interest.
Demon Dragon Uzumaki · C3
Heavenly_Devil: But, with the father there, the element of 'instability' and how to overcomes it is gone. Without that, it's just a story without... challenge and obstacles. What's the point of having a father, if you lose the chance to grow stronger with only having half of what you really wanted? Imagine this- Your born, and you dont have a father. But, as you see your mother struggle to make a living, you get motivated. Wanting to help out, you try your hardest. Now that that's done, let's imagine this- your born, and you have everything, from both parents to enough money to live a comfortable life and a bit more. Without a need to work harder, but still wanting strength, the difficulty rises, not physically, but mentally. Anyways, that's my opinion.
Ascending the Heavens in Marvel · C21
_Ramzey_: Lol what are you guys on about? Nothing even happened yet xD
Unbeatable! Invincible! Unparalleled! · C234
Readerboy333: author your taste .....are rather unique but don't worry your readers will support..... as long as you don't force your likes on us
Unbeatable! Invincible! Unparalleled! · C234
Yammyi: We both know that this plot armour is weaker than my physics exam scores😭
Fury Towards The Burning Heaven · C49
Shippudenisthebest: Lol😂 she might think that you have a fetish to steal milfs
The Sinful Life of The Emperor · C116
True_Seeker: She read till the fake mom grave chapter. She exploded after knowing how Kiba used such a trick to get Sarah.
The Sinful Life of The Emperor · C116
DemonNo_1: Just tell her that if your ideals were same as Kiba's, then you would have had no time to write this novel
The Sinful Life of The Emperor · C116
Darkdelusion: Showing this novel to a girlfriend😱. That is the most daring thing I have ever heard
The Sinful Life of The Emperor · C116
True_Seeker: Just today my girlfriend read my novel and she was shocked to say the least. She eyed me with suspicions like Kiba's beliefs were mine T_T I assured her I'm not shameless like him but she believe only a shameless man could write about a shameless hero
The Sinful Life of The Emperor · C116
Dusk_of_Snow: Hahaha can't wait till he gets to central and goes ' Hello junior apprentice brother. As a son in law I came to pick my wife back up after she was snatched. No problems right?'
Warrior's Promise · C393
dragon_god1: I think that Shin and Kanari have a great chance to end up together.Even Shin is a human and no human can remain content with loneliness and also Kanari is giving her best so I think even he will have to respond to her feelings.
Spirit Immortal · C369
guyx: shin is just a normal man. no one can go on forever alone and yes for now shin dont know if he can get to rank 100 and even if he can he might fail to resurrect ariel after all. i feel like this stroy is more real and not a dumb like others.
life can takes you to many places that you didnt plan to things can change but we all need warmth even MC.Spirit Immortal · C369
Leon07: So we have Main missions and side quests, but what's the difference here? Usually side quests are optional and don't affect main quests much. It might modify main quests, but failing a side quest preventing you from even obtaining the main mission? That's not right. And what about main quest 4 and others? Will they be triggered without completion of main quest 3? Rather than side quests, they all look like main quests to me. And all the quest failure conditions are a bit harsh.
This might sound rude, but author-san, I think you need to slow down, take some time to think and plan properly because you're losing a lot of readers due to the sudden change in Eliza's personality and the forced actions.
Even now, her sudden desire to go on an adventure. Heck does anyone realise Felix is only 6 years old? She's gonna leave him alone in a new city where he knows no one to fend for himself? Sure he is no ordinary kid, but still that's a really dumb move. Does she even know whether he has enough money with him for himself?
So as I said, think and plan a bit more. Unless you plan on making this a plain hentai with just ero scenes most of the time, it might be better to focus on the storyline a bit as well and not force events too much. ( No harsh feeling, I just wanted to give a heads up because I really liked the story at the beginning with all the mischief, but ever since felix's d*ck started working, the story feels plain )· C45
PartOfAWhole: I thought he was focusing on trying to unlock the soul seed and get fighting experience from the real world
Heaven's Wrath · C65
HasaDigaEebowai: Thanks for the chapter ... Why do I feel something very ominous is going to happen in the 1 year ? Since they are mentioning the 4th ability being "dangerous" I have a feeling Shin might cripple himself by the end of the year T.T
Spirit Immortal · C359
Danterama: "I am ... the inevitable..."
Are you Thanos !!???Unbeatable! Invincible! Unparalleled! · C201
Successor of Primordial Origin · C0
