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TehPhoenix: I also noticed the 'Price' thing, but cum was actually correct in this case since it's used as the preposition:
"combined with; also used as (used to describe things with a dual nature or function)."

The Devil's Cage · C996
2 weeks ago

SometimesITalk: I actually will have most of those removed. I was in recommended in both the site and the app.. and that lead my novel to receive almost 100 spam reviews for exp or whatever.. There are also multiple negative ones.. unfortunately.

Anyway, yours is one that will stick, because despite I really don't like the way you approach adventure webnovels, I wouldn't remove a thought out review. But since it contributes to lower my score.. for the people who will decide whether to get into my book based on the negative reviews, I have to explain why you can't trust certain reviews.

The reason why it irritates me, is that (believe it or not) there are certain factors that will lead people to read or not read a novel. Two of those, are a low rating, and a bad review. I think they are the fourth and sixth factors with the most contribute to it.

Yours is one of the few non-spam reviews I can actually try to examine and debate. It's like a yelp review.. food is good, service is good, the place is nice and clean, the music is nice and doesn't disturb.. but here goes a 1 star because the fork was a little dirty.. I'm not really okay with, just like restaurant owners aren't..

Sovereign of the Karmic System
1 month ago

SometimesITalk: You've read the third chapters, then checked the titles of the others.. found no action, even though the fourth chapter is called "Battle between beasts".. it's a long novel. The description of the main character is important. I can't imagine how little patience you have if in the first 15 minutes of reading you're already sickeded by the lack of action. This is a fantasy, and an adventure novel.. not a game of call of duty.. and liking your own review won't give it more legittimacy.

Sovereign of the Karmic System
1 month ago

SometimesITalk: This is a webnovel, and an adventure at that. What I strongly disagree with is, the legitimacy of a critique which was based on three chapters.. Anybody that has read a book in their lives knows that the first part of the book is made to introduce characters, and present the world setting. If you want to focus on the story, you can also present the end of a specific event, and then go back in time to explain what led to that event.

And to be fair, I could have even understood the superficial way of reading that you've described, but your comment was not a real review. It was a complaint. "For the first 3 chapters he did this and not that" - "No action in the first 3 chapters, so I've read the titles.." - "He uses difficult words".. This I am not willing to take it in silence.

It might be a "legitimate" review based on your standards of what a novel should be, but if I have to keep it in my page, and have people read it before they even give my book a chance, I have the right to say mine about it, right?

My review of your reading ability is that: You don't start a book with an open mind, and are mind is aggressively locked on what you want. You want an adventure that is set on full action from the very first sentence. You want the writing to be easy and comprehensible, and when you run out of patience (very quickly I may add), you skip ahead to find support to your claims, and an excuse to drop the novel. You then make your complain clear, and unnecessarily harshly, despite not having had spent enough time on the work to be able to evaluate it completely.

I give your reviewing abilities 1 and a half stars. (note how none of my points are talking specifically about my book.. I'm just assuming based on how you've formulated your entire review.) I am not trying to be offensive or harsh here. I swear I am not.. I truly believe that, with the type of character, you would be better fit in ready comicbooks or watching anime. That will give you adventure, action 24/7, and definitely comprehensible wording.

Thank you for your review.

Sovereign of the Karmic System
1 month ago

lukereps: Aww does it hurt your ego to know that your story isn't as good as you think it is? How sad! What's even worse is that you basically reply the same thing to all the people who has given you a low rating. No originality, not a good writer. I give it a 2 star. 😂

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
1 month ago

lukereps: Started great, but when the Harem and overly detailed sexual stuff came...it was just 'meh' for me. It went downhill from there. Also, the story shifted from a more combat/skill honing story to a more slice of life kind.. Make up your mind author. You're over reaching, and you're failing miserably.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
1 month ago

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Gamers of the Underworld
1 month ago

N0ES: You had too much ramen, the tumors in your brain have swollen enough to get in the way of your reading comprehension.

Lord Xue Ying · C991
8 months ago

DaoistThreelimbs: Several things here. I'm not sure why everyone worries for his family as if they wouldn't be protected. I also don't get why she would accept him when she herself is reincarnated. Furthermore, I'm not sure that the realm heart order works the way that regular reincarnation works. I took it to be that you are reincarnated with all of your memories intact from the start. Though, I'd probably enjoy this story more without the family aspect.

Lord Xue Ying · C988
8 months ago

LOMChineseComments: I know this too. During examinations, hold your pen straight. When the pen falls to the east, choose A. When it falls to the south, choose B. When west, C, north, D. Also, I also have a baffling sense that a pair of eyes are staring at me. 😏
——by Chinareader juebanbanbobo

Lord of the Mysteries · C43
11 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
Seeking the Flying Sword Path · C1
11 months ago

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Last Wish System
1 year ago

_UltraPsycoBoy_: @Shakition, dude the thing is facts don't care about feelings.

1) The fact that he has bad English makes this novel difficult to read.
2) The fact that the author doesn't know how to write dialogues makes this novel bland.
3) The readers do not care if this is his first work or his last. Since it's bad, it's bad.
4) Although I admire that he's writing despite of his problems, that doesn't automatically make this a good read.

The point that I wanted to get across is you defending the author does not make the book any better.

Last Wish System
1 year ago

Nalgene: Literally everyone saw this coming.

Seeking the Flying Sword Path · C556
1 year ago

A_K_: Considering that it does makes sense.....well with mass release its a lot of chapters to buy with stones so i guess i will have to wait.

Kingdom's Bloodline · C143
1 year ago
It's based on word count, and in case you haven't realised, most of the chapters in this novel are equivalent to 2-3 chapters from other novels. View More

A_K_: Even the top ranking chapters (like kings avatar) doesn’t cost more than 13 stones.........20 to 15 stones per chapter....this is bullsh*t.

Kingdom's Bloodline · C143
1 year ago

whoknows: See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

Seeking the Flying Sword Path · C541
1 year ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring View More
Seeking the Flying Sword Path · C541
1 year ago

CreamPuffDelights: Oh course it leads to a relic. Even though there hasn't been a relic in millions of years, or a landslide for that matter. It just so happens there was one, recently. And just so happened that there's a relic there. Probably gonna have some tournament too while your at it, that will have something the mc will absolutely need.

The Brilliant Fighting Master · C88
1 year ago

Miistwalker: Just realized where my comment started from, think I'm going to have to change that statement xD. My original meaning should have been that writers profit greatly from people reviewing their work because (the ones that write a decent review) points out the good and the bad in the novel for the readers which also helps the writer. I mean my review on this was 3 stars and I wrote why people would be discouraged reading this novel. The author replied saying thank you for the review. But yes it is not the job of the reviewer to give advice directly to the author I just like doing so I guess, thank you by the way for being somebody that's reasonable, so hard to find those kind of people online.

Last Wish System
1 year ago
I said "It's not the job a reviewer to give advice..." You said "Actually it is." Clearly you believe that reviewers are required to give advice.
Regardless, I've never said that authors can't use reviews to help guide their writing, but as you said, it's indirect, i.e. not the purpose of the review. As for the people who give poor reviews, I would argue that there are an equal amount that give 5 star reviews that are equally unhelpful.
At the end of the day, they are all just giving their opinion in order to inform potential readers. They don't have to, nor should they be obliged to help the author. Naturally it would be nice if they could, but it's still up to them. View More

Miistwalker: I understand what you are saying but my argument isn't that reviews are supposed to give advice but generally you give a review and point out the bad parts in the story hence you are indirectly helping the author by giving a review, ofc if you just say bad novel don't read and give it 1 star then you are just being a dick. You would notice most reviews point out that the novel is bad I hate people that write like 2 words and say good novel/bad novel because they don't help at all id rather somebody tell me why its good or bad. Also at no point in time did I say that the person reviewing is required to do anything.

Last Wish System
1 year ago
I'm sorry but it's ridiculous to claim reviewers are under any obligation to help authors; they are there to help inform potential readers, that is the reason they exist.
Sure, there's nothing saying they can't provide helpful advice should they wish to, but whether they choose to or not is their prerogative - it's not something they are required to do. View More

Miistwalker: Actually it is. A large amount of people who write novels rely greatly on reviews to refine their story.

Last Wish System
1 year ago
The fact that there are novels with worse English than this novel has nothing to do with anything. That's like saying that shoplifters aren't bad because there are worse criminals out there. Shoplifters shouldn't be celebrated because they are 'less bad', just as this author's work shouldn't.
Besides, the writer of this review never said anything about grammar, they were talking about the quality of the writing, which is clearly mediocre at best.
And they never insulted anyone either, they just critiqued the novel. View More

Maudib: It's pretty crass to troll a story with a poor review like this, with a probably alt account. Do a good job with your own story instead of insulting others bec you are jealous. This story is far above the average here and is still great to read, despite some typos or grammar mistakes. In fact many stories here are much worse in terms of proper english...

Last Wish System
1 year ago

Glamour: I'll keep rating 1 star until we get a response and no power stones for you

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