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koolsalad

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i like reading novels

2017-08-02 Joined Global

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Replied to Hassan_Hadi
I take it you’ve never had a shave before.

Seeing two new customers walk in the shop owner got up from his chair, and patted the stool over. "Hello, are you here for a hair cut?"

Godfather and Godson

Godfather and Godson

Book&Literature · Mark_Ward

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Commented
Think this is what we call a railroad lmao.

"Oh." He said, his gaze moving over to Attuoria, who was also staring at him. "Well Dumbledore says yer comin' with us. Yer gonna be a first year. What's yer name by the way?"

Attuoria | Harry Potter Fanfiction

Attuoria | Harry Potter Fanfiction

Book&Literature · sayhellotohanna

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“Active defences are way too taxing on mana, and most of the passive defences I can use will have the chance to cripple the development of my brain as I’m so young. I don’t know if that, because I reincarnated, it is different since i have previously developed mind protections when I became a fully fledged mage. So I’ll restrict myself to preparing them, but won’t use them for now.” (Added part makes no sense) Beginning: -“Passive defences will possibly hinder the development of my brain” End: -“only one i will use for time being is passive one” Passive damages brain... uses anyway... [img=faceslap]

My active defenses are too taxing in mana and most of the passives one will possibly hinder the development of my brain since I'm so young and I don't know what will happen with me being reincarnated since I developed my mind-protections only when I became a fully-fledged mage at 17. So I will prepare/create them but I won't be able to use them, for now, the only one I will use for the time being is a passive one which will tell me if someone is trying or reading my mind/memories.

Harry Potter and The Lost One

Harry Potter and The Lost One

Book&Literature · Ascian

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koolsalad
Replied to Jackal_Zirson
VERY minor formatting errors. “Why so long...” and after is not needed, you can enlarge the story by adding more punctuation.

I was quite surprised to see that my mathematical knowledge from my past-life is mostly the same in this world but with different names and formulation, I browse through the subject and I'm already at the college level and in 2-3 I will be ready to engage with their university level. Why so long because I will restrain myself and concentrate my efforts on magic.

Harry Potter and The Lost One

Harry Potter and The Lost One

Book&Literature · Ascian

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koolsalad
Commented
Try to keep lists gathered together, because you put a story paragraph in the middle of the list... it makes less grammatical sense. There are some times you can still do it, but it’s something to avoid...

Lastly, I'm a cute little girl with black hair running down to my lower back and emerald green eye, I will be without a doubt quite a beautiful woman in the future with my facial feature.

Harry Potter and The Lost One

Harry Potter and The Lost One

Book&Literature · Ascian

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koolsalad
Replied to Jackal_Zirson
(Even if I doubt that i have any relatives still alive... Because if they were, they would have visited me.) :?

-Try to contact the magical world and try to find any other family members. (Even if I doubt, I have relatives alive because if they were, they should have picked me.)

Harry Potter and The Lost One

Harry Potter and The Lost One

Book&Literature · Ascian

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koolsalad
Replied to Anime_Asim
Technically its a fop out.

(AN: Here's what his dragon form and human form looks like)

Dragon In The Multiverse

Dragon In The Multiverse

Anime & Comics · TeeNo

koolsalad
Replied to Fanfiction_Fanatic
If I wasn’t clear your day doesn’t matter to me, i dont have any plans to read this. I do not find it good for multiple points, there are better things to read.

"The Hufflepuff ring grants you the ability of semi-self sustenance, you will now only need to sleep once every two weeks for four hours"

Wizarding World: Arcturus Black

Wizarding World: Arcturus Black

Movies · Fanfiction_Fanatic

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koolsalad
Replied to ProSpect
No, it’s two. He uses a “.” So its split into two sentences through structure.

First wish:: I want to be born in a british wizarding family having no relation with voldemort and no casualty in the war due to death eaters.(Don't want to be spied by the Greater Good guy.) with all my memory intact and Occlumency.

In Wizarding World With Wishes

In Wizarding World With Wishes

Book&Literature · Being_Humble

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Commented
Yes, my local bank has a world selection desk lmao

Then I came here(Reincarnation Counter), there are many counters like HELP DESK, WORLD SELECTION, just like we see in banks.

In Wizarding World With Wishes

In Wizarding World With Wishes

Book&Literature · Being_Humble

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