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Fallout 4 Infinity · C16
2 days ago

Krader: I was going to read this until I read this review. What's a character without character development? I appreciate character development and well thought out plot lines so based on the review I won't be reading this.

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
3 days ago

Chana_Batati: Dude, this section is for to review 'THE BOOK' not the "READERS" . Lol. Criticising readers isn't for You.

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic
3 days ago

Aldunhokoron: He should have told his mom and let her in to his vault. Such a shame. Such a waste of a good human resource.

Fallout 4 Infinity · C2
3 days ago

Aldunhokoron: Wait he didn't even give a burial for his mother??!!

Fallout 4 Infinity · C2
3 days ago

Tylor_Roney: Im not really sure how to go about it
Its just weird hearing their names at the end every conversation also spectre name is cringe worthy and having people act like its a normal name makes realism drop a bit

Just write how u like ill survive
Maybe you find a better way later on

Fallout 4 Infinity · C2
3 days ago

KoFu_: Stem pak? Jesus...Is Stimpak... Please correct that Huge mistake.

Fallout 4 Infinity · C2
3 days ago

Elsontiger987: Plus I wished nora was would have been the Mc's lover.

Fallout 4 Infinity · C2
3 days ago

1stSlug: Spends months training and becoming a badass. Gets put into a coma via toaster. Derp.

Fallout 4 Infinity · C2
3 days ago

bigandy624: Yeah, writer's block sucks. I wonder if you had gotten over it yet, so I decided to post a review. That being said I know of several routes you could take in vault 3. From fighting Nelphi to the ranger hidden in the vault. Thinking back, this is the reason I always deal with the Great Khans first. The one guy gives you a mission that allows you to walk right in the vault unimpeded. Then I would do the mission, kill Motorrunner and then sneak out the back way with the ranger. You should be able to sneak in with so few guards and pull the same trick. Save for you know, ganking Driver Nelphi.

Not So Lonesome Road · C69
3 days ago

MilkGod: Scissors.

Not So Lonesome Road · C45
4 days ago
It wouldve been better if he just keep his mouth shut about his power and knowlegde. Its like a 15yr old kid trying to tell the whole world that hes special. View More
Not So Lonesome Road · C40
4 days ago

Erik1991: Oh god it's just like the game this is the negative of the system they always find out that its you for some bs reason.

Not So Lonesome Road · C18
4 days ago

1stSlug: How in the hell did they find out it was "the Courier"?? Did the MC leave annoying taunts or something?

Not So Lonesome Road · C18
4 days ago
Why the hell reveal all of that to anyone? Is it just to brag for self satisfaction? Theres no reason whatsoever to tell that to anyone. Its so cringey listening to him bragging 'i know everything about everyone' with smug on his face. View More
Not So Lonesome Road · C14
4 days ago

Paradox41295: Cass please I love that fiery redhead

Not So Lonesome Road · C14
4 days ago
Okay that tsundere thing just ruin immersion. Anyway devin sure easily accepted his fate in his new life like its natural. He shouldve addressed his past life and how its difficult to just move on with his new life. View More
Not So Lonesome Road · C10
4 days ago

The_Rorschach: So you’re fawking telling me this fawking MC became the fawking Dragonborn before the age of 15?!!🙄 And this mofo is even able to use all 3 words of a Dragon shout without killing an actual dragon (who have yet to appear mind you!) and absorb its soul or visiting and clearing one of those shrines where you learn and absorb the next word?!!! Man how about you just FAWK OFF!!! 🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️

Dragonborn Saga · C35
4 days ago

The_Rorschach: So I went back and looked it up and there was a misunderstanding in my part. So apparently anyone capable can use the Voice aka shouts. BUT! In actuality it’s extremely, extremely difficult to learn it, and would definitely take decades upon decades of dedication and unrelenting training and discipline to master it if your not a Dragonborn. That’s why all the Greybeards are nothing but old farts past their prime who’re dedicated in nothing but the voice! So my initial reaction was still correct!🤓 how can you expect me to believe your MC character learned the voice, and not only that but a few words as well, from only training under a year with Nurina... 😑 really, you expect us to believe that shet?
“Don’t worry guys I’m not going to make the MC OP at all!”😉
JUST 👏 FAWK 👏 OFF!!! 😤

Dragonborn Saga · C35
4 days ago
This is what i call an asspull. We dont even see him train and all of sudden he can do the shout. And you just randomly give an explaination that he had trained it before. Hmmmmmmm View More
Dragonborn Saga · C35
4 days ago
I agree 100%. It had potential in the beginning but the mc characteristic and the inconsistency just ruined it for me. View More

LegendaryMob: Good? And probably one of the best fanfic in this site. But...

Still at chapter 40 and despite how much author keeps saying stuff about immersion. I can't really immersed in it.

This novel kinda really reminds me of the novel "The experimental log of the crazy lich". Both have lots of info dumping, heavy plot, out of place comedies and somewhat mentally illed mc and characters. Which imo is kind of good but really hard to bing read. I dunno bout others but reading heavy serious plotted novel but suddenly went comedy most of the time is kinda headache inducing. And in this novel, i don't like the fact that the mc's perspective is on 1st person point of view. Hard to appreciate the heavy plots when the mc's mind feel so jumbled and keep jumping everywhere and here we are reader looking at in 1st person pov. Serious situation are always dumped by a funny mood that always came out of nowhere. And comedy can came in random places cause the character introduced are also a bit retard and have messy personalities. I mean i don't really see any normal people in the mc's circle. His friend are children so personality is fairly innocent and normal but gets weird sometimes, adopted mother won't publicly show any care to the mc and most of the time humiliate him, Crazy maid, nowhere to be found mom, random aunt, always mad antagonist, serious and a bit wacked underworld people etc etc.

TLDR.. It has a serious and heavy plot but the comedy overshadow it. It's a good read but ain't really that fun to read. There's a lot of fanfic in this websites that's very fun to read but only overshadowed by this cause of its neat grammar and writing, and those novel's poor slow updates. This the kind of novel that a has to be read slowly while tolerating the mc jumping pov instead of bing reading it in turn.

Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago

LegendaryMob: Good? And probably one of the best fanfic in this site. But...

Still at chapter 40 and despite how much author keeps saying stuff about immersion. I can't really immersed in it.

This novel kinda really reminds me of the novel "The experimental log of the crazy lich". Both have lots of info dumping, heavy plot, out of place comedies and somewhat mentally illed mc and characters. Which imo is kind of good but really hard to bing read. I dunno bout others but reading heavy serious plotted novel but suddenly went comedy most of the time is kinda headache inducing. And in this novel, i don't like the fact that the mc's perspective is on 1st person point of view. Hard to appreciate the heavy plots when the mc's mind feel so jumbled and keep jumping everywhere and here we are reader looking at in 1st person pov. Serious situation are always dumped by a funny mood that always came out of nowhere. And comedy can came in random places cause the character introduced are also a bit retard and have messy personalities. I mean i don't really see any normal people in the mc's circle. His friend are children so personality is fairly innocent and normal but gets weird sometimes, adopted mother won't publicly show any care to the mc and most of the time humiliate him, Crazy maid, nowhere to be found mom, random aunt, always mad antagonist, serious and a bit wacked underworld people etc etc.

TLDR.. It has a serious and heavy plot but the comedy overshadow it. It's a good read but ain't really that fun to read. There's a lot of fanfic in this websites that's very fun to read but only overshadowed by this cause of its neat grammar and writing, and those novel's poor slow updates. This the kind of novel that a has to be read slowly while tolerating the mc jumping pov instead of bing reading it in turn.

Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago

SaintViking21: Firstly, my english is not that great so i dont really mind the grammar and all of that. Now the MAJOR ISSUES. The novel would be much better if you just write in 3rd pov.
The story started great, i love how he noted down all the events thats going to happen later on, how hes meticuluos etc. But the problem is he doesnt act on it. Like imagine all the loots that he can get and sell it to become rich. He can even start his own business like introducing commodities from his past live to aid him to become more powerful or even make his own territory. Yep he doesnt have any solid goals.
Secondly, the mc. His character is all over the place man, the inconsistency is unbearable. At first he has moral and principle then all of sudden he change to maniac without reason then he change back to being okay like wtf whichever it is just pick one.
I noticed that you got influenced by your readers alot, seriously you can listen to their opinions but dont let them run the story. Not to mention, the character retardation comedy like that kitty thing, the bad erotica is ridiculuos. For me the story started to going downhill when he left riften.

But hey its just my opinion. Ive mad respect to you for your passion in your works. Keep it up man.

Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago
Reading Status: C29
Firstly, my english is not that great so i dont really mind the grammar and all of that. Now the MAJOR ISSUES. The novel would be much better if you just write in 3rd pov.
The story started great, i love how he noted down all the events thats going to happen later on, how hes meticuluos etc. But the problem is he doesnt act on it. Like imagine all the loots that he can get and sell it to become rich. He can even start his own business like introducing commodities from his past live to aid him to become more powerful or even make his own territory. Yep he doesnt have any solid goals.
Secondly, the mc. His character is all over the place man, the inconsistency is unbearable. At first he has moral and principle then all of sudden he change to maniac without reason then he change back to being okay like wtf whichever it is just pick one.
I noticed that you got influenced by your readers alot, seriously you can listen to their opinions but dont let them run the story. Not to mention, the character retardation comedy like that kitty thing, the bad erotica is ridiculuos. For me the story started to going downhill when he left riften.

But hey its just my opinion. Ive mad respect to you for your passion in your works. Keep it up man. View More
Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago

Ziavory: 😑 Why is this in the top 10?
Don't listen to the reviews, at most this story is average. It started out interesting but the mc acts like a generic, hotblooded 16 year old with very little development in the brain section.
Excluding the fact that the world seems to revolve around him, he's op in the bad way.
And the 'politics' in this world seems a bit...childish.
Because it's totally normal how the mc who was an average guy in his past life is so much more cunning then the seasoned, old adults. Go read Joy of life or something for better, more realistic politics.
The story is not bad, but it's also not good.
It's Meh.

Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago

Nightdrift: Seeing as you cannot easily pull up and edit a long past review I am just writing another, initially this book was fantastic and a great fan fic, while it is still quite good a few of the characters are becoming more 2d where as before they had a lot of depth cough Jullanar cough, amoungst others. the writing style is also overly excitable (waaay too many exclamation marks), which when it started in the view of a 10 year old was great, but now all the adults and the now late teens have that feel to them, it makes the book feel like a happy, chirpy, chibi slice of life novel, which just feels like sloppy writing as there is a lot of death and gore at times. All that being said I still enjoy the novel, please take this as constructive criticism Mr Author. I also love your other novel the undead mage :)which is definitely a lot darker, but the characters all feel a lot more fleshed out and real.

Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago

lupen: The story premise is quite good and starts of very smooth and i thought it had quite the potential when i first started reading it, but after ch 50 the story goes downhill very fast. The main character, Jon pretty much turns into the very common cringy, mainstream protagonist who overcomes every obstacle with the power of friendship, harem, incompetent enemies and plot armour. This is of course fine depending on the novel, but the elder scrolls world is very dark so it isn't exactly a place where such happy characters belong.

Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago

delta12: Just like some people said, it actually a fanfic done right.
Unfortunately I think the author probably sometimes forgot that he didn't write an erotica. In the beginning, all those chuni thing actually kinda funny. The fan services with the bathhouse wench still tolerable, but when he oversexualized it with degenerating one of the woman the MC banging secretly in his office like a swine (he actually made her "OINK"), turn two of MC's love interest as a bisexual slut that will lick each other if MC absent during their horny moment and dual cultivation BS, then all oblivion broke lose.

I think the author felt to the same hole like author of twilight by self insertion to much.
It"s a shame that the hentai thing now integrated with the main story again.
I had to drop it after the dual cultivation thing and the kitty moonlight incident that might or might not be lead to bestiality in the future. Let's hope not.

Perhaps I will pick it up again in the future if there"s an abridged version.

Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago

Godling77: Suddenly glad I stopped before that. The h-scenes weren’t even good. Felt way too much like a xianxia than a Skyrim fanfic should.

Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago

KoFu_: Making him getting all skills and attacks possibles is not a requisite to be able to kick ass.

You could make him a hammer welding mage and that would be stretching of reasonable possible if he is talented enough.

Basically he could became a strong paladin. But you choose him to level all the skills balanced. Is there anything he couldn't do? If there isn't why is the necessity of the companions? His blacksmith friend is the only necessity enough because he doesn't LIKE to be a blacksmith. He doesn't see a worthy profession, not like enchanter.
And the cat girl? Harem. The rest doesn't even matter.

I see this master of all thing like an indecision of path. Like they told him before, he doesn't have a concrete goal set. Only to be strong enough to steal all the artifacts before the supposed player appears.

My advice is to cap his growing skills at an average level to make him make a decision of the path to follow. A more solid goal could be cool, like founding a kingdom and introduce the modern world commodities (if they are not yet implemented by a weird mod) or ****** enough to avoid world calamities and became a hero.

Also it would be a TERRIBLE idea to introduce firearms to this medieval society. If you don't belive me do a little research. Changes need to be gradually.

Anyway, you are the author. But the non-stop grow of skills is making him a God and the only thing that stopping from that happening is the effort he makes. I just don't want you to fall on the cookie cutter op mc before even reaching a proper story development.


Ps:You can use all the things on the world with his followers or allies. Or even enemies, he can learn from them. The MC is not required to do all the things to shine. And even that, he doesn't require to shine all the time.

Is my pitch of salt, I hope you take my suggestion from the good side, this is a good novel but is being led to an generic end.

Dragonborn Saga
4 days ago
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